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Pushing Daisies: Perfect Harmony

Dec 04, 2007 01:22

Title: Perfect Harmony
Fandom: Pushing Daisies
Author: kawaiispinel
Feedback: ...Is loverly.
Word Count: 702
Rating: PG
Characters: Olive, Alfredo
Pairings: Olive/Alfredo
Summary: That was the best Christmas present anyone could ever give her- a moment of real bliss just like this that was hers and hers alone and not borrowed vicariously or ( Read more... )

pairing:pushing daisies:olive/alfredo, fandom:pushing daisies

Comments 18

chicafrom3 December 4 2007, 21:18:09 UTC

*flails happily* Oh, God, I love this so much and it has made my day SO much better, you've no idea. I can hear them, very clearly, in my head! You nailed their particular speech patterns so BRILLIANTLY and...if this doesn't become canon I will cry. ajdane;anejk they're so cute.

*loves HARD*

kawaiispinel December 4 2007, 23:22:11 UTC

Yaaay! ^__^ I'm so thrilled you liked it! *huggles*

callieach December 4 2007, 21:46:09 UTC

"Why are we whispering?"

"Why are we talking?"

That dialogue there just made my day. Awesome job.

kawaiispinel December 4 2007, 23:23:14 UTC

Heeee! Thanks! I loved that bit myself, and was probably the primary reason this was written. XD

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kawaiispinel December 4 2007, 23:23:39 UTC

Thanks! ^^

anonymous December 5 2007, 03:21:35 UTC

Oh, that was indeed perfect.
I hope the writers think like you do, and we can see a scene like this soon.

dramatic_sigh December 6 2007, 01:17:42 UTC

Oh, this was adorable! I love Olive and Alfredo and it's so rare to find a fic with them, let alone a good one. And yours covers both!
"I would never say anything like that unless I meant it from the deepest part of my heart,"
Oh, Alfredo. He is such a sweetie and your fic totally captured that. Great job!

kawaiispinel December 6 2007, 04:03:22 UTC

Thanks!

(And there really should be more Olive/Alfredo. I seem to be the only one writing it. ^^;; )