a breakdown of thoughts

Mar 06, 2010 23:47

a breakdown of thoughts
Hankyung/Eunhyuk, other ninjas
PG, love, friendship, comfort, disorders
Hankyung has always been his favorite. They’re special friends.
(1890 words)

A/N: I don't have much to say right now, actually. But, yay otp <3 (and I'm sorry if this gives you the sads, like it did for me)

For Eunhyuk, it’s a normal day. Nothing is different. )

suju: donghae, suju: han geng, p: leeteuk/heechul, g: love/romance, suju: sungmin, suju: kyuhyun, p: han geng/eunhyuk, fandom: super junior, suju: heechul, suju: leeteuk, suju: kangin, g: friendship, suju: eunhyuk, r: pg

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mawaru_berry March 7 2010, 04:48:52 UTC
spot for Jessica, 13fireflies &hearts &hearts

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13fireflies March 7 2010, 23:09:45 UTC
OH BB WHY???
*bursts into a pool of tears*
OMG there's just so much, so much in this.
The pain, the love and the oblivion, and the "special friends" *sobs*

He tells Donghae about the dream that he had the night before, about Hankyung-hyung and he claps his hands when he finishes, smiling wide enough for his face to break. This is just the cutest thing ever. Eunhyuk dreaming about Hankyung and grinning about it as he tells Donghae what naughty things were you dreaming about hyukkie?? ;P

Eunhyuk snuggles into his hyung’s arms and says ‘thank you’ because it’s the polite thing to say when someone compliments you. Sweet bb, so sweet. Like candy from the sugar bowl.

Eunhyuk doesn’t like how Kyuhyun holds Hankyung’s hand, because Hankyung is his special friend. He watches Kyuhyun around Hankyung and wishes that he could bury himself in a snow bank and sing the three bears’ song. Because Hankyung taught him all the words and how to dance to it. (And he remembers how Kangin had laughed and patted him on the head because Hankyung isn’t ( ... )

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mawaru_berry March 8 2010, 02:13:07 UTC
omfg yes they were dirty dreams! I was so vague in hinting at that, I wasn't sure if anyone would catch it XD

I liked that broken!HanHae part waaaaaay too much, haha. Poor Hae baby.

You know, I wasn't even thinking of a sequel but now that you've demanded one, I'M GETTING EFFING IDEAS FOR ONE.

♥♥♥♥♥ ILYSFM. There needs to be a better term than love, there really does.

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13fireflies March 8 2010, 02:50:47 UTC
HAHA I KNEW IT! Hanhyuk moments are so precious. Even if they're dirty, it's okay :DDDDDDD

Broken!Hae makes me cry so bad. But i like reading it, because it's different.

YAY!!!!! hopefully a sequel with smut?? ;P

I ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ U
XD

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hyukti March 7 2010, 05:25:49 UTC
but but....what's wrong with Hyuk? what happened? my heart dropped for him when I realized Hannie was going to leave him there.

that was so sad. Hyuk's mind is like that of a child. and why did Donghae said hyung breaks heart?

T_T

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mawaru_berry March 7 2010, 05:33:22 UTC
Basically, when I started writing this, I made it so that Hyuk has a mental disorder. I didn't want to go into detail, so sorry if it was confusing >.<

Donghae was just upset about Kyuhyun spending time with Hankyung. It was my lame attempt at hinting at HanHae…I fail. I'm sorry I don't make much sense, but thank you for reading this!

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hyukti March 7 2010, 05:43:24 UTC
ahh...so Hyukkie likes Hankyung, but Hankyung is with Hae? T_T poor myeolchi bb.

no no bb, dun wori about not making sense, it's just me being curious despite knowing that sometimes ppl do write with the intention of making the readers think and imagine what's going themselves. I'm annoying like that lol. this is already nicely written.

have a good sleep =)

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hyukti March 7 2010, 05:44:14 UTC
*what's going on

I FAIL >.

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mawaru_berry March 7 2010, 05:45:06 UTC
It just ended up like this…although I think my original ending was a lot happier. But it just, I dunno, didn't work :\

Haha, I know this isn't your otp, bb, but thank you for reading this anyway <3

I made Donghae sad >.<

HELL, I MADE EVERYONE SAD. Except, Kyuhyun seemed pretty content. I don't know, I didn't talk about his emotions, lol.

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mawaru_berry March 7 2010, 05:48:44 UTC
I'm a little vague sometimes >.< I'm sorry!

kjdfhg don't cry! *hugs you tightly*

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mawaru_berry March 7 2010, 13:22:21 UTC
…I'M SORRY D:

If it makes you feel any better, I yelled the same things at myself when I finished writing this >.<

Aw, thank you so much. Again, I'm sorry this was so heartbreaking. Yes, you got it right! Thank you for reading!

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