심장 part 3 (end)

[mawaru_berry]

Hankyung is half awake when Donghae tells him that he’s leaving. His mind is clouded, and at first he thinks that Donghae is trying to run away, and something besides physical pain grips his heart. He can’t figure out what it is, but it hurts him-it hurts him in other ways.

“Don’t…” he makes a grab for the younger man’s hand. “They’ll catch you

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[tarmenel]

jakasgkasglksajglksajfa

[tarmenel]

my chest is quivering. i think i need to go to a heart hospital and meet donghae and fall in love. oh god.

Oh, screw it. Ge, I like him. He means so much to me.
for some reason, that was like.. my favorite part of the fic. HENRY/KIBUM WAS MY FAVORITE PART OF THE FIC.

Well, not really, but I really loved it, its so cute, they're so cute. ♥

The truth is that Donghae fixed him.
That line made me shiver.

This was really quiet and touching and sweet and lovely and epic. It's so, so wonderful, baby. ♥ Your writing is so pretty~ ♥ I love it. ♥!

[mawaru_berry]

LOL NINJA HENRY/KIBUM. WHEN I NOTICED THEM, THEY LIKE, KICKED ME IN THE FACE.

I spent so much time agonizing on how I would phrase the last line XD I'm so glad you think it worked out.

I LOVE YOU.

[shihan_ai]

dude it annoys me that my ninja spoting is failing grrrr

[mawaru_berry]

YOU ARE NOT FAILING.

[shihan_ai]

OMG THIS. YOU MADE ME STUMBLE AND SCRAMBLE THROUGH THREE PARTS TO FINISH THIS PIECE OF GORGEOUS BB~

OK AT THE START I THOUGHT THIS WAS GOING TO BE MAJOR MAJOR ANGST WITH GENG HAVING A HEART PROBLEM BUT OMFG HEART HOSPITAL AND HAE AND CHULLIE AND KYU BB HOLY CACTUS. I LOVE THE RELATIONSHIPS AND THE COMPLEXITY OF THE DYNAMICS BETWEEN THE QUARTET AND HOW DIFFERENT IT IS WITH HIS OTHERS FRIENDS, AND HOW BOTH ARE SO IMPORTANT.

SIWON. SIWON JUMPED OUT AT ME SUDDENLY AND GLOMPED ME EVEN THOUGH IT WAS TINY AND I WAS LIKE OMFG DOES GENG LOVE SIWON?!!! IS HE MARRYING VICTORIA?! BUT IDEK OMG I READ IT SO FAST CUZ I WANTED TO FINISH I WOULDN'T BE SURPRISED IF I MISSED LIKE A WHOLE PARAGRAPH.

Donghae is to me as Kibum is to you. OMG THAT HITS ME RIGHT IN THE KIDNEYS AND IT'S GOOOOD.

OMG SO MANY POSSIBLE PAIRINGS LOL. AND OH HENRY *SMUSHES*

BB I LOVED THIS. LOVE YOU. OH GOD <3

[mawaru_berry]

LJ MADE ME SPLIT THIS UP D:

OKAY, HONESTLY, THIS WAS GOING TO BE SUCH A BUCKET OF ANGST WHEN I FIRST PLANNED IT i was going to have Donghae die, or run away, and then Heechul was going to try to kill himself, and it was somehow going to end up as KyuHan, but obviously, that's not what happened.

SIWON JUMPED OUT AT ME TOO. HE WAS LIKE "HEYYY I WANNA SHOW UP. JUST ONCE? OKAY! *convinces me with cuddles*" I'M WRITING A SPINOFF, SO YOU'LL SEE WHO HE'S MARRYING.

LOL IN THE KIDNEYS?

I LOVE YOU TOO. I LOVE THIS CAPS LOCK COMMENT SO MUCH. I READ IT BEFORE SCHOOL AND IT MADE ME SMILE FOR THE REST OF THE DAY, BUT I COULDN'T REPLY UNTIL NOW WHEN I GOT HOME ^_^

[followurdestiny]

SPOTTT!

[followurdestiny]

ahwww... Hae fixed Geng's heart ♥♥♥
and the letters between Henry and Geng...
The heart is a curious organ, how it can be broken (by Siwon or in Chul's case Victoria?), get sick and be healed again ... by love :-)
Geng's ♥ = ♥
♥this (Geng-bias, mine is just as bad XD)
♥♥♥♥♥

[mawaru_berry]

You are so spot on with this comment <3

Thank you so much for reading!

[dip_eiffel_tea]

FFFF AWW I LOVED THIS ;__;
THEY FIXED EACH OTHER. OR SOMETHING. THAT IS SO SWEET!! AAH♥ ♥
there were so many things i wanted to say while reading but somehow i forget them all now that i am typing...
W/E I LOVED EVERYTHING.♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

[mawaru_berry]

that's okay-sometimes i forget what i want to say about fics, too XD

thank you so much! <3

[volatileflame]

this was beautiful <3

[mawaru_berry]

thank you ^_^