심장 part 3 (end)

Feb 10, 2010 00:50

Hankyung is half awake when Donghae tells him that he’s leaving. His mind is clouded, and at first he thinks that Donghae is trying to run away, and something besides physical pain grips his heart. He can’t figure out what it is, but it hurts him-it hurts him in other ways.

“Don’t…” he makes a grab for the younger man’s hand. “They’ll catch you ( Read more... )

suju: donghae, p: kibum/henry, suju: han geng, r: pg-13, g: angst, g: love/romance, suju: kyuhyun, au: heart hospital, suju: heechul, p: han geng/donghae, birthday!fic, p: heechul/victoria, g: friendship, suju: kibum, suju: henry

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13fireflies February 14 2010, 20:30:44 UTC
I LOVE THIS. IT BROKE MY HEART AT THE BEGINNING AND NOW IT'S FIXED. I FEEL LIKE I WENT THROUGH WHAT HANGENG WENT THROUGH. <3

Donghae nods against Hankyung’s shoulder. He doesn’t move as Hankyung starts to sit up, or as he’s gently pushed onto his back. He doesn’t move when there’s a hand sliding fingers into his hair and a pair of lips pressing against his forehead, nose, mouth. He doesn’t move until he deepens the kiss, leaning forward into Hankyung’s hold on him. Donghae pulls him closer until their chests are touching and their bodies have full contact. It’s so warm, and something inside them both ignites, but Hankyung doesn’t care if the monitor over his heart goes insane. THIS WHOLE PARAGRAPH IS JUST BEAUTIFUL. I LOVE HANHAE, OMFG, SO MUCH.

Donghae stares back, and they hold each other with their eyes until every other passenger boards, the engine starts up, and the vehicle departs. Donghae puts his hand to the glass. i can imagine Hae's face on the window, like a little kid leaving his parents.

“Yeah, before they change ( ... )

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mawaru_berry February 15 2010, 00:09:13 UTC
AKSJHGKDJFHGD LONG COMMENT IS LOVE.

HanHae! I don't know how this turned into HanHae because it was supposed to be something else, but then it became this!

Aww, that's actually how I pictured it, too. I'm glad you saw that ^_^

kjdhgkjdfhg OH KYUHYUN. He was supposed to have a bigger part in this fic :\

I FIXED YOU? does that make me Donghae??? SWEET!

omfg LJ was such a pain in the ass, seriously. it was having like, seizures and twitching and it made my internet all spazzy. this was supposed to be one giant fic, but LJ was like "fuck nooo~ THREE PARTS, BETCH"

XD

thanks for reading, bb <3

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tulita September 7 2010, 12:19:31 UTC
hsdjklfhskdhflskhjf oh my god i have no words. i wish i did. just-this is so perfect and literal broken hearts? how beautiful and sad and genius, and your writing is so pretty. ♥_♥ for you.

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mawaru_berry September 7 2010, 14:01:46 UTC
thank you so much! ♥

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