The six word challenge.

Mar 22, 2024 03:02

Desire ( Read more... )

slash sort of, mfu, six words

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olden_fan March 22 2024, 10:50:01 UTC
Here is mine:
“I am tired of your criticisms.”
“I simply do not understand your vigorous pursuit of this…”
“Your desires and mine do occasionally differ significantly, Illya.”
“Napoleon, I don’t understand why you need it so badly.”
“It’s kind of a fantasy I’ve had for years…”
“Apparently our fantasy lives differ significantly.”
“The first time I saw it was on the school yard as a kid…”
“This is ridiculous. You risked too much!”
“But I finally have a Mickey Mantle rookie card in hand! What’s your beef?”

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nakeisha March 22 2024, 11:10:57 UTC
*Laughs*

Oh, a very nice mis-lead and a really good use of the words - they all slotted in so well.

Nicely done, olden_fan.

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olden_fan March 22 2024, 11:18:14 UTC
Thank you so much!

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spikesgirl58 March 22 2024, 12:42:06 UTC

Hahaha! I felt that way when I was holding a Detective #28 Good job.

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nakeisha March 22 2024, 11:09:44 UTC
::Coughs::

Ahem. Yes. I see what you mean by your 'a little naughty' comment.

This was a lot of fun, it really was. It made me laugh. A seamless use of words.

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spikesgirl58 March 22 2024, 12:42:27 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you had fun with it.

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nakeisha March 22 2024, 11:11:31 UTC
Here's mine:

Doyle dragged his hand through his wet hair and shook his head vigorously, whilst muttering about bosses.

"Hey, watch it, Ray. What's your beef with the Cow this time? Drink?"

Doyle held out his hand. "Ta."

"Well?"

Doyle downed the whisky in one. "I don't mind criticism. I don't!" he snarled. "If it's warranted I don't mind it. But this time - You know I had a real desire to make him shut up."

"You didn't?"

"Course not. I like me job. Better than the Yard any day."

"Really?"

"Yeah. Got you here, ain't I?"

Bodie grinned and ruffled Doyle's curls.

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spikesgirl58 March 22 2024, 12:43:22 UTC

Hahaha, the more I watch stuff like Lewis, the more I understand the whole pub culture. Great job.

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nakeisha March 22 2024, 12:55:41 UTC
Thank you.

Yes, English pubs are somewhat different from what I know/have seen on TV about American bars.

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spikesgirl58 March 22 2024, 13:03:45 UTC

They are a constant source of entertainment for me. :DD

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dancingpony March 22 2024, 12:42:43 UTC
I’ve been miserably ill since Monday and I’m only about 50 percent now, but I tried….

The beefy guard shoved Napoleon, hands cuffed behind his back, into a cell barely three yards square, then dropped the limp form of the Russian to the stone floor.

“If you desire a tip,” Napoleon said with an insouciant smile, “you should handle my, ah, baggage more carefully.”

“Take your criticism of the service up with management,” the guard sneered just before his feet were swept from under him by the unexpectedly vigorous blond agent. His arms flailed and his head hit the floor with a thud.

“One guard; how insulting,” Illya tutted scornfully. “We should take our business elsewhere.”

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nakeisha March 22 2024, 12:57:23 UTC
Oh, poor you *Sends get well soon vibes your way* I do hope you reach the other 50% soon.

This is really good; I like the little twist at the end - so Illya.

A very good use of words.

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spikesgirl58 March 22 2024, 15:34:33 UTC

I am so sorry to hear that. Is it a cold, the flu, something else?

You wouldn't be able to tell with your drabble. it was perfect.

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dancingpony March 22 2024, 15:57:44 UTC
It’s not an infection of any kind, since all my bloodwork came out normal, but my ears are full of fluid (probably from seasonal allergies per the doctor) which triggered severe vertigo. Couldn’t do anything but lie in bed with my eyes closed for several days and couldn’t hold anything down, even water. Ended up in the ER Wednesday for IV fluids when my blood pressure dropped to 103 over 50 and my heart rate sped up to 112. Today I can finally hold down toast and get out of bed for a few minutes without getting too dizzy, but looking at a screen is still hard.

Sorry if TMI. Yours is great. I like a little naughty, but as I said, looking at a screen (or keeping my eyes open at all) is still a struggle.

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