Spike City Chapter 4

[spikesfool]

This was meant to be a chapter of Bangkok Butterfly, which I'm going to work on now. But SC wouldn't let go of me, so I had to write some more of it. The boys finally meet face to face. I don't think it's ever taken me four chapters to get them talking before.

Comments

[spikes_evilbint]

Loving this! Can't wait for more!

[spikesfool]

Thank you, sweetie. That makes my toes dance!!!

[a_mistletoe]

Now look here you! One cliffhanger ending could be considered unfortunate, but two!!! I am now hanging on for this as well as Bangkok Butterfly. Just as well I'm on holiday and can pace for several days, though not too many I hope.

The characterisation of Spike in this story is just great. I think he is spiralling out of control of the hit and everything he tries to do to get back in control will just dig him into a deeper hole.

A knee nudged Spike’s thigh under the shelf of the bar. Could have been a casual shift in position, but maybe not, and Spike was getting the beginnings of a stiffy, no matter what the reason. It was time to make himself scarce before things got out of hand.

*Sniggers* Too late I'd say.

[spikesfool]

Hee. Way, way too late for Blondie Bear. He wants his big, tall lollipop so he can lick him all over.

*hangs head in shame* I'll try to work fast to get both those cliffhangers resolved. I'm really not ev0l at heart (well maybe just a little).

You're very good to me, sweets, and I appreciate it so much. Thank you for all your comments and support. *great big hugs*

[vampyrehunterm]

Spike's playing a very dangerous game. He's going to end up with a world of hurt for his efforts. Sooner or later, Porferro is going to realize that Spike isn't doing what he's supposed to and things will go bad, if they aren't already.

[spikesfool]

It's true. Spike is stringing things along, beginning to think of reasons why he can't do the hit yet. Going into the bar was way out of line. But he was bored, and Spike, under his icy facade, likes to stir things up. He had to see Angel face to face. And now he has. Plus he's got another little problem. :D

[angelsiredspike]

They just can't help loving each other.Great chapter!

[spikesfool]

Thank you, darling.

[jasonsnene]

What the....EEP! *runs to next part*

[spikesfool]

Hee. I surprised you, huh? Yay!!!