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'Amarantine' Chapter Nine - Return

Sep 26, 2010 20:37

Title: "Amarantine"
Chapter: 9 of 10 - Return
Rating: PG
Pairing: John/Elizabeth
Genre: Romance/Angst/Drama
Summary: "He didn't have forever, but you do. And you wonder time and time again, if that makes a difference."
Author's Note: This is my first Atlantis fic in quite a little while, and it feels nice to come home every once in a while, I've ( Read more... )

romance, fanfic, angst, sga, drama, john/elizabeth

Comments 7

vickysg1 September 26 2010, 11:20:17 UTC

Heeee!!! Elizabeth is back with John! And yeah, the only way to convince him was to tell him that she will die if they go forward with the plan.

Oh God, only one chapter left... *sighs* I love this fic very much, hon!

southernred2 September 26 2010, 12:42:15 UTC

when John was right there, strong and young, just as he was, just as he is, right there before you, his eyes bearing into your soul from the moment he noticed you looking..

You have killed me dead. And I have too much to do to be dead. But I don't even care.

smb_books September 26 2010, 13:16:11 UTC

Holy Mother of GOD! EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! She's back! He's there! They're there! OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG WOW WOW WOW WOW

*flails as silently as possible cuz her hubby and kiddo are still sleeping*

AHHH-MAY-ZINGGGGGGGGGGG

suzotchka1 September 26 2010, 14:11:14 UTC

YAY!!!! She's back with John!!!! :)

anuna_81 September 26 2010, 18:48:17 UTC

He likes this plan because it's doing something, anything, to fight back. You hate it, for the same reasons. Pleading with your eyes, you look up to him, that slight inch that makes him feel so much larger than you are. "Please," You whisper again, because your voice is too shaky to raise. "If you can't do this for them, John. If you can't do this for all the people that are going to die when the Replicators strike back," You swallow, barely containing the fear of pushing the line you're terrified to cross. In another life, this would work. But you're scared to think that this place you've returned to, where John is John again and everything is as you remember it from years ago, is somehow different. You're afraid to think that he's not going to feel the same as the John that held your hand as he died of a long, lonely life. "Do it for me ( ... )