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'Amarantine' Chapter Five - Remember

Sep 10, 2010 23:53

Title: "Amarantine"
Chapter: 5 of 10 - Remember
Rating: PG
Pairing: John/Elizabeth
Genre: Romance/Angst/Drama
Summary: "He didn't have forever, but you do. And you wonder time and time again, if that makes a difference."
Author's Note: This is my first Atlantis fic in quite a little while, and it feels nice to come home every once in a while, I've ( Read more... )

romance, fanfic, angst, sga, drama, john/elizabeth

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speckleberry September 11 2010, 07:22:42 UTC

You know after your 4th chapter I was checking every day for the next, and today I got your gift. Yeah, I'm sorry about that. I've been in job change-over mode and it's been really stressful. Hopefully, next week, I'll be more consistant about everything LJ related. ;)

So happy you're still enjoying it.

smb_books September 10 2010, 17:39:30 UTC

Wow. Again. Just amazing. I always feel like I'm the edge of my seat when I'm reading each chapter. It's like "hurry up and let me know how everything turns out" is fighting with "this is really good and I think I'm going to be sad when it's all over". :-)

speckleberry September 11 2010, 07:23:28 UTC

Oh, that's a lovely compliment, thank you! I really appreciate that. I hope to have more up soon, we're half-way through ;)

a_blackpanther September 10 2010, 22:00:53 UTC

Very very nice, and it needs.to.be.more. Now!

(why, yes i am impatient!)

Also, there is a bit of an something in there: Elizabeth and Meredith are standing near the railing, but then suddenly Elizabeth raises to her feet again.

speckleberry September 11 2010, 07:31:18 UTC

LOL, OMG, really? Like I said, completely un-betaed. I suppose something like that was bound to happen. Ah well, hopefully not many people notice. Hehehe.

Wait, nah nah nah. I can see really clearly where you might think that, because I've not been clear. I've said she 'rises' but I actually just meant, she looked at her. She lifted her head. LOL. My bad. I can't be bothered fixing it, but it's not exactly what you though. (That's with me reading through it quickly. But it's totally my fault, lol. Awesome catch though, you're good.)

vickysg1 September 11 2010, 08:31:31 UTC

Lovely chapter! I loved this discussion between Elizabeth and Meredith, and I can't wait to read the one between John and Elizabeth. And awwwww, she doesn't want to lose him! :P