Comments | sparrabethx: Moats, Boats, and Waterfalls

sparrabethx

Moats, Boats, and Waterfalls

Apr 03, 2011 14:08

Title: Moats, Boats, and Waterfalls
Summary: After TSN wraps filming, Andrew is dealing with the feelings he has for Jesse. Semi-based off of Edward Sharpe and the Magnetic Zeros' song "Home".
Rating: PG13
Word Count: 2,027

( Holy Moley, Me Oh My, You're the Apple of My Eye )

fanfiction, jewnicorn

Comments 5

zoetrope13 April 3 2011, 19:23:25 UTC

This was very cute :D

Oh and I try not to be nitpicky or anything but I think here(only to find his mother sitting on his bed.) you meant girlfriend. Because that would just be a completely different story :D Other than that typo it was good.

salvadore_hart April 3 2011, 22:29:41 UTC

This is very sweet and drunk!Andrew is quite possibly the most adorable thing ever.
I loved the way it flowed, all very sensible and nonsensical at the same time. Read really well as Andrew's stream of consciousness (hopefully these last two sentences made sense)

apintofblood April 3 2011, 23:20:01 UTC

This is very, very sweet and lovey! I particualrly enjoyed this line:

"Yeah, Andrew’s straight like Jesse’s hair."

HAHAHAHA FANTASTIC.

fourtysteps April 6 2011, 04:29:38 UTC

i was a little nervous at first when shannon was mentioned, because my first thoughts are: "I DON'T WANT POOR SHANNON TO GET HER HEART BROKEN DDD:" etc etc, but i think how it turned out was actually pretty awesome. i smiled a lot. shannon's actually quite fantastic and i hate reading fic that she's degraded (is that the word i want? idk, idk!) in any way. you did a fantastic job though! i love how she mentions that she can't even be mad because how cute they are. OH, IT'S SO TRUE, SHANNON. I'D BE SO MAD AT THESE BOYS FOR RUINING MY LIFE IF THEY WEREN'T. SO. DAMN. CUTE.
this was a completely wonderful piece of writing, sweetie. i almost kind of squeed when i read your summary because lately i've been listening to that song "home" on repeat, and it's always in my head. so yes, that made the story much lovelier for me to read. the song was incorporated into the fic in the best way, and was not cheesy or lame, as i often see. BRAVO, MAGNIFICENT, SUPERB JOB. infinite love for this story ( ... )

campscoline7373 April 6 2011, 23:30:56 UTC

Worrieed there for a moment Jesse was going to say no. Fiuuuh!