Watchmen (Super Sentai) Five Kink Meme

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Rules of the meme:

1. Anonymously(or not, because we seem to have stopped following this rule) post a pairing and prompt you would like to see written. Since this is a kink meme, there is supposted to be a kink involved, but normal well-written prompts should work just as well.

2. Anonymous will respond to your post and write it for you! Art and such

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Service Above Self part 8 in full

[anonymous]

Continuation of the Dan-as-a-cop-chasing-Rorschach prompt.

Original thread:
http://spam-monster.livejournal.com/4155.html?thread=11942715#t11942715

The first comment is what's already been posted of part 8, just for completion's sake, but the rest is new.

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Dan sits in his basement, trying to think as he pries a spring out of an old grappling gun. It’s not that he feels any safer down here-only a lunatic would feel safer around half-finished high-grade weaponry-but he forgot how much tinkering around helps him think, and God knows he has enough crap to tinker around with down here. Whatever he does, he has to act quickly. Dan already knows what he should do, which is hand everything he knows over to a higher authority. In fact, he should be on his way to the station right now, pistol under his jacket in case he runs into Rorschach.

His eyes itch with tiredness. This isn’t even something he needs to think about-Rorschach needs to be put in

Re: Service Above Self part 8 in full

[anonymous]

“This is breaking and entering,” Dan says lamely, dumbfounded

Re: Service Above Self part 8 in full

[anonymous]

The air is very still; the rank smell of cigar smoke is starting to make Dan feel sick. He’s pretty sure that the Comedian is letting that sink in, but Dan hasn’t been an NYPD as long as he has without facing himself down. He’s not intimidated. He sets the wrench down on the table with a definitive clunk: He doesn’t need to hear any of this

Re: Service Above Self part 8 in full

[anonymous]

He waits for an hour. Two hours. Curtains and windows open and shut, but each time he focuses on them, it’s to unfamiliar faces, angry and worn and shining with sweat. People go in and out of the building; he listens to two people arguing in the alleyway between buildings for fifteen minutes, wondering if he should intervene, before they break up of their own accord. The AC he’s camping out by seems to be broken-it’s dead silent-though at least it’s providing a little bit of shade. With some regret, Dan peeled off the jacket a while ago; it sits folded on the roof within arm’s reach with his pistol settled on it

Re: Service Above Self part 8 in full

[anonymous]

Oh my god this story is so sexy and wonderful and brilliant. I loved it before now I'm infatuated all over again. Eddie was perfect and Dan stalking Rorschach (!) is so, so hot.

I know their regard for each other is very very fucked up, but I'm seeing it all through sunbeams and pink sparkles and it feels like the most romantic thing ever. I want to see them in looove. They're gonna fix each other, and Celine Dion is going to be singing the soundtrack. I KNOW IT.

Re: Service Above Self part 8 in full

[anonymous]

IAWTC! (i'm not right in the head)

Re: Service Above Self part 8 in full

[anonymous]

I love this so much! I went and read it again from the start and it's just wonderful. The attention to detail and to the characters is a treat.

Re: Service Above Self part 8 in full

[anonymous]

I am reading this while watching "Shaft", and that is somehow fantastic. xD I ♥ this story so damn much, Anon - it just keeps getting better!

(and dude, kudos for making the Comedian cool in this bit!)

Re: Service Above Self part 9a

[anonymous]

Dan stays awake until mid-morning, and then, sweating and walking with purpose, he goes back to Rorschach’s apartment. Even Rorschach needs to sleep, and, well, it’s most likely the safest time to come back. He doesn’t head down to the alley right away, and ends up spending half an hour camped on the roof, goggles in place, watching Rorschach’s window for signs of movement. When his impatience and fear have reached a crossroads, he sucks in a deep, steadying breath and begins the climb down.

The costume should still be there. Dan sneaks around the garbage, the stench of rotten eggs wafting through the alley. It was right-here-right between a dumpster with red graffiti on its lid and a flat tire. Dan glances up; it’s actually a pretty secluded spot, with enough clutter on both sides that it’s easy to duck out of view of the street. Dan crouches, one hand on the pistol hidden under his jacket. A faint buzz is in his ears. It should be under the moldy cardboard box. Should be-Dan carefully tips it, and there’s the costume, right where

Re: Service Above Self part 9b

[anonymous]

The heat’s finally broken into the tenuous coolness of fall, and Dan’s patrolling with his windows rolled down, soaking in the cool breeze, when a dispatcher comes on his radio to tell him about a robbery at a gas station nearby. There’s no mention of fatalities, but Dan expects the worst as he flips on his sirens and speeds through the late-night traffic

Re: Service Above Self part 9c

[anonymous]

The solution comes to Dan in the early morning, as he’s showering off the grime of a long, exhausting shift. It’s so obvious that he’s shocked he didn’t think of it months ago. He should be asking questions of the city-there’s a list at each precinct of criminals who've been brought in by masked heroes. Rorschach must have some clear, semi-predictable method of finding his prey. It seemed that there wouldn’t be any better sources of information than his fellow vigilantes, but of course, they were probably the worst people to ask-after his shift, Dan sits down and makes a list of civilians he should’ve talked to months ago. The landlady, the vendors by his apartment, bartenders in the area, criminals who’ve since been released; hell, any of Rorschach’s neighbors who Dan can corner would have better information. By the time he’s finished marking up his map and has listed everyone he can think of, Dan’s eyes are drooping from exhaustion

Re: Service Above Self part 9d

[anonymous]

Dan pivots on his heel, surprised. A middle-aged woman in a gray apron is studying him, tired and wary. A huge keychain hangs from her belt. “Uh, yes. Or I hope so.” Dan wipes the sweat from his forehead. “Are you the landlady?”

“We don’t have any vacancies,” she says, and opens the office door.

“No, actually, I’m looking for-uh, a friend. He lives here.”

“He didn’t give you his apartment number?” she asks, skeptical.

Dan smooths his hair back. A door opens upstairs. “He did, but I, uh, forgot it. He’s got red hair, on the short side?”

The steps creak with weight. The landlady raises an eyebrow, folds her arms across her chest, and leans against the doorframe. A scruffy, unwashed teenager shuffles past them, and Dan relaxes. “You’re his friend?“Well…coworker

Re: Service Above Self part 9d

[anonymous]

I AM SO HAPPY TO SEE THIS UPDATED! You've got huge talent in describing scenes and actions, this story has been exciting from the start. Can't wait for more!

Re: Service Above Self part 9d

[anonymous]

So pumped to see this again; this is a fic I've always been rooting for.

The conversation at the end is some powerful stuff. Is it bad how hot I find it?

Re: Service Above Self part 9d

[anonymous]

If it's bad, you're no worse than me! I can't get enough of these two like this. *gnaws on F5 key*

Re: Service Above Self part 9d

[anonymous]

This is fantastic. I'm really looking forward to seeing it continue. Your ability to paint a scene, and your skill with characterization are both great.