Fic: One Night Only? (Part 8)

[spainawards2008]

Title: One Night Only? (Part 8)
Pairing: David Villa/David Silva, Torres/Silva
Rating: R (There’s a blurry watercolour style sex scene of sorts)
Summary: Silva thinks Villa just wants to be friends and…well he isn’t coping too well. Enter Nando…
Disclaimer: This is fictional. There is no proof that any of this happened.
Feedback: Feedback keeps me warm

Comments

[delirium_86]

Omg!!! Caught by Villa!

Loved it. I'm curious about Iker and Cesc... hmmm...

[kat_lys]

When he finally woke up at an acceptable time to go and get breakfast, he had found Villa’s arm lying across his waist.
Poor boy! I'm sure it doesn't help him! :S

Silva wondered for a second why people always referred to it as Villa’s room instead of his and Villa’s room.
I don't know why but it didn't surprised me at all. It feels like calling it Villa's room is natural... Weird :S

“I’m sorry and you can sleep in my bed tonight if you like.”
Aww, Iker/Cesc love! Those two are cute! :)

Fernando is bitching again, trying to make Silva believe that Villa and Cesc slept together... No way it could have happened! I love how Nando get closer and closer to the Canarian, seducing him while comforting him... :D
And don't worry about how you wrote them having fun, it was nice! :)

They've been caught up! Know this would happen but this is amazing to read. And I was excepting Sergio but clearly not Villa! Argh, you can leave it there!!! :D

[unscathed]

Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7

Haha. I did it for her because I want her writing, not stopping to archive. :DDD

[unscathed]

OHMYGOD! I, literally, covered my mouth and gasped at the last line! I think that this is the best chapter so far and it sounds like it's just going to get better.

Happy that Sergio caught them! *instigator* I've been wondering how he'd feel/felt about his boyfriend being the team tramp. Does he care? Is their relationship open? Are there rules about who each can sleep with? Enquiring minds want to know, Sergio!

I feel really badly for Villa because it seems that he can't read Silva's emotions properly. He must think Silva doesn't care for him, at all! :( And to find him with Nando of all people! I'm not sure whether to expect a hurricane-type rage or just a complete emotional shut-down towards Silva. Poor fictional Villa. I want to send him flowers and a hug

[naturalpyro]

three things
-brilliant!!! I can't wait to see this play out.
-you cut is broken
-the rating should be R even NC-17 because oral is considered sex. And you wrote about it graphically.

Again brilliant! More please.