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[Fic] Come Back To Me -- [03/?]

May 23, 2010 02:21

Title: Come Back To Me [03/?]
Author: Sozuki17
Characters: Romano, Spain, Italy, Germany, France, maybe others later.
Pairings: Spain/Romano, maybe a hint of Germany/Italy later... not sure.
Rating: PG13-ish
Warnings: Human names, abuse, hurt/comfort, no rape (I'm trying to be original here) XD
Summary: It had been almost three weeks since anyone ( Read more... )

fanfiction, anime: hetalia

Comments 8

ghibli22 May 23 2010, 10:36:53 UTC

......Why do I love angst so much? Great job and I hope you continue soon.

mykonos2 May 23 2010, 12:41:40 UTC

I don't like angst, but I do like this... :D

Hope there will be more soon!

sozuki17 June 18 2010, 03:14:43 UTC

I don't like angst, but I do like this...

I'm glad! XD And yes after almost a months wait there will be more soon!

kaiya_tan May 23 2010, 15:29:06 UTC

angstangstangstangstangstnyyaaaaaa~~ DDDDDDX

*paws at you* n-need m-morrrreeeee TT_TT Please~? I can feel Lovi's pain man, I can feel it! And I love that I can! And France.....France was so cool T_T

Oh, and btw Antonio+Mother Hen = pure cute/awesomeness. Cuz I can see that. I can -totally- see that.....

sozuki17 June 18 2010, 03:13:39 UTC

*late to replying to comments, but hey I'm getting there*

I'm really glad that you are enjoying it so far! And I'm really happy that you think I did an okay job with France. I've only ever really written him once before (in the Spain/Romano exchange... that I just realized that I never actually posted here. Meh.) so the fact that someone thinks I did okay makes me feel awesome. XD

MotherHen!Antonio is indeed just too incredibly cute and awesome to miss out on. I'm hoping I can manage to get a little of that in this story. >D

Thank you for reading and commenting!!!

monelisa June 3 2010, 08:01:44 UTC

“Antonio would have been heartbroken.

;___________; it's so...both-sided. wah. wah. WAH. -bawls- Please continue writing! I'm impressed with your realistic take on this; the angst is way too good (XD)

Just one phrase that I'm not sure was a mistake or not, Why would Francis lie about something like this? There would be no benefit in it for him, or anyone really. Did you mean Lovino? I want to know if he lied to Francis or not, the cliffhanger is killing me :

sozuki17 June 18 2010, 03:10:09 UTC

Sorry, I didn't mean for it to be confusing! XD I meant that there wouldn't be a benefit for France to lie about himself being raped in the past. Why would someone who had (in Lovino's perception) complete control over a situation and lie to say that they themselves had been dragged down to where Lovi believes he's at. Even further down if rape was involved.

I hope that makes sense? But no, Lovino was not raped. That is one thing I'm making clear. And I put it in the warnings because no rape for these types of stories is a rare thing it seems and I wanted to try and make it more original. ^^; I don't know how well I'm succeeding, but I'm doing my best! XD

There will be another update soon (I'm working on the next chapter right now) =D

monelisa June 24 2010, 22:06:19 UTC

oh I see, so that's what you meant XD Though I wonder how far general trust for France goes in the canon...?

Thank you for keeping it realistic though, it is true that rape is actually 'rare' and unfortunately, in the fanfiction world it's...unoriginal. ^^; thank you thank you thank you <3 I'm huge on realistic stories xDD

will be waiting~! *w*