House (Not Greg), ch. 10

[sowell]

Hey! Funny Naruto-related story! My computer crashed last week, and they had to power it up in the store to figure out what was wrong with it. At first I was embarrassed by my pretty, Naruto 'n Sasuke fanart desktop. Because really - I'm way too old for that shit

Comments

[melonhed85]

i love this story i knew you didnt really kill naruto. though it was quite amusing watching sasuke lose his mind to a hallucination of naruto. i cant wait for the epic battle. =)

[sowell]

Thanks! One epic battle, coming up!

[transient_words]

I'm glad that I'm not missing this chapter this time. I'm even gladder that you chose to update today, of all days. I've had an awful week behind me, and will have the pleasure of having so much work for my finals that I'll probably die of stress overload by the end of the finals. I'm not a happy camper, and this has killed any desire in me to write. But it hasn't killed the desire to read your work! However, you've also been inspiring me (and cheering me up

[sowell]

I read your entry about what happened with the test. :( Sorry hun.

As always, your feedback is so nice. It's not always clear what attracts a reader to story, but I'm glad this one is continuing to entertain you, anyways.

Heh, I'm surprised ANYONE actually thought he was dead! I thought it would be ridiculously obvious that he'd come back. But then I got some legitimately upset feedback and felt AWFUL.

You've been slowly been changing him for the better, and I can already see that Naruto has had a profound effect on him.

Long stories like these are tricky, because I want to give Sasuke some growth by the end of the fic, but not so much that he's unrecognizable to the reader, you know? I want him to do what fits my fic, but I want him to stay in character, too. I guess we'll have to see if it's successful at the end of the fic.

I loved that you made him protective of Sakura!Thanks! I'm a NaruSasu girl through-and-through, but I love Sakura as a character, and I think that she also had a pretty impressive impact on Sasuke in Part 1

[sowell]

Haha, I'm like that too. Glad you're liking it!

[istne_pieklo]

Oh God... This was so powerful! I'm glad Sasuke changed his mind, but still, something tells me the final battle is going to be intense. This story is definitely the best story I've read in this fandom (or any fandom for that matter) and I'm glad to see your updates are steady and frequent. <3
Sasuke finding out Naruto is alive - that was soooo heartbreaking! And simply gorgeous.

[sowell]

OMG, my head just swelled to four times its normal size. Thank you!

Yeah, I know how frustrating it is to be left hanging on a WIP, so I don't start posting the beginning unless I already have an end, and the major climaxes are written.

Thanks for the feedback!

[shankthespine_x]

You are such a tease, m'am. And I was thinking there that you killed Naruto off for good. :O

Moarplz.

[sowell]

Haha, nope! He was always coming back. I didn't realize so many people would think he was gone for good. :)

More coming right up. Er...in a couple days.