House (Not Greg), ch. 10
Hey! Funny Naruto-related story! My computer crashed last week, and they had to power it up in the store to figure out what was wrong with it. At first I was embarrassed by my pretty, Naruto 'n Sasuke fanart desktop. Because really - I'm way too old for that shit ( Read more... )
As always, your feedback is so nice. It's not always clear what attracts a reader to story, but I'm glad this one is continuing to entertain you, anyways.
Heh, I'm surprised ANYONE actually thought he was dead! I thought it would be ridiculously obvious that he'd come back. But then I got some legitimately upset feedback and felt AWFUL.
You've been slowly been changing him for the better, and I can already see that Naruto has had a profound effect on him.
Long stories like these are tricky, because I want to give Sasuke some growth by the end of the fic, but not so much that he's unrecognizable to the reader, you know? I want him to do what fits my fic, but I want him to stay in character, too. I guess we'll have to see if it's successful at the end of the fic.
I loved that you made him protective of Sakura!
Thanks! I'm a NaruSasu girl through-and-through, but I love Sakura as a character, and I think that she also had a pretty impressive impact on Sasuke in Part 1 of the series. If he's being honest with himself, I think he cares for her as well, and always want to remember that.
Your review is, as always, awesome. Thanks! And I hope this week goes better for you than last week.
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