Another day, another Atlantis AU...

[southernred2]

If you've ever wondered what The Shrine could have been like if John had been the one infected instead of Rodney, then this fic is for you. I gave it my own little twist by putting it in an AU in which Elizabeth never left, Carson is still Carson, and nobody has ever heard of Keller. I like Kanaan and Torren, so we kept them. So, let me present

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[the_scary_kitty]

*flails and squees* ZOMG, they're all so CUTE!

Oh poor, poor John. It's so much fun to whump him. But hey, they didn't even have to drill into his skull and mess up his pretty forehead, LOL!

Kanaan offering to take John on a fishing trip with him and Torren was so sweet. *wibbles and reaches for the tissues*

Rodney's comment about the giant space booger was PRICELESS. Because yeah, I was so thinking it! XD

Dinner. Dinner is good, John. Now go woo your girlfriend! *squees*

[southernred2]

Wow, that was fast. I've been working on this for a very long time. LOL I think if this had happened to John, that he would have turned into the sweet little boy I wrote about. I tried really hard not to Forrest Gump him.

Thanks for enjoying it.

[the_scary_kitty]

Oh, John would absolutely be that sweet little boy. *sighs and pets him* And Elizabeth would wonder how he turned into such a naughty, naughty boy. *winks*

[gateraid]

Absolutely perfect. You got that just right - a bit hard to read in places due to the subject matter, which was similar to the aired episode. One of the best fan fics I've read :)

[southernred2]

Thanks. It had to be written.

[ankareeda]

Awwww, this was absolutely sweet. ♥ Amazing work!

“You're my girlfriend.” John grinned at her, and she refused to meet his eyes.

Dwaaaa! So cute! ♥♥♥

I loved the ending so much! *squeeee*

[southernred2]

Thanks. You know John wouldn't have forgotten that bit. LOL

[ugahill]

This was so cute! I remember being uncomfortable in the Shrine just because of what happened to Rodney, and this made me moreso, which is a good thing. I think it would have ripped my heart out if it happened to John. :P

Having Elizabeth back made me happy and broke my heart too. Ah, the potential! <3

Well done. :)

[southernred2]

Thanks, I guess I accomplished my purpose if I made people uncomfortable. Seeing John like this would have torn our hearts out, and just imagine what JF could have done with it.

[shipperwriter]

For some reason, I never saw this fic until just now, but OMG *squee* I love it! It's perfect!

Space booger, reciting Pi, "you're my girlfriend," such perfect moments. Awesome job!

[southernred2]

Thanks. I had almost forgotten this one myself. LOL