[01/01] Backup Valentine

[soucieux]

title. Backup Valentine
pairing. pikame, akame (je)
rating. r
summary. kame just got back from seeing jin in nyc. it's valentine's day!
author's note. for the 24 hour valentine's day challenge though finished in a significantly shorter period of time. if i ever try to write jin in la again, please punch me in the face. other fic can be found

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[twirlingleaves]

"But, you know," Yamashita takes a sip of his soda. "He's Jin. So."

"That made everything better when we were like, sixteen," Kame hisses, eyebrows furrowing and lips thinning. "We're not sixteen anymore. We're grown men."

): I love how Kame said that. It's different, you know? I love that Jin being Jin isn't okay anymore because they're not kids, something simple like that can't make anything better. But it's kinda like Kame's just being silly, like he always is. He's always pretending to know better. :/

"You had sex, though," Yamashita says, softly, hands curling and pulling the jeans down over Kame's slim hips. "These, right?" His fingers run softly over disappearing bruises.

Aksjg;ajksdj. ))):

I really like this. Not sappy V-day fic. It's really good. But god, my heart.

[soucieux]

Kame is like..well. It's a short fic so it's hard to explain. But YES. Definitely indecisive. His mind is sort of flitting around. He's angry that Jin asks about Pi but not him, but not so angry that he doesn't love him / have sex with him. But then he also goes to Pi because he's hurting and AHH. Kame. ): He hurts my head.

♥ THANK YOU.

[gingifere]

Oh ouch. You write angst so wonderfully, perfectly well.

Some how the ending just made my heart ache for them. This line, Yamashita smiles wanly against Kame's bellybutton, trails tiny kisses down down down. "As long as you don't lie, it's all right." is just so melancholic and incredibly sad.

akslsa I kind of want them all to go back to be young and simple where Jin could be Jin and it was ok. But sadly they grew up. And in a way I don't think either of them would want to go back to that. Our OTP is so angsty. :(((((

[soucieux]

Thank youuuu~ Imo, Pi wants Kame but he also wants to fix things. So he's stretching himself thinly and doing things for everyone else rather than himself.

Well Jin's done some growing up lately!!! Things are better than before LA and after Summary, I think~ \:D/

[peroxidepest17]

God I am so bad at reading these three but OW. I like how patient Pi is with everything; I guess with Jin as a BFF you'd have to be a little bit. ^_^

[mousapelli]

oh, kame. ♥♥♥♥♥

[pixisticks]

This was sort of melancholy, in a way. It wasn't quite enough to be SAD, but it was that... lingering weight, you know?

Pikame is fun, though it makes me sad to think of Jin being lonely and angsty and unhappy. ;.; *squishes him* ♥ ♥ ♥

[soucieux]

It's sort of detached, I think, so that's why it's not really SAD.

Thank you so much for this comment! ♥ And it's Pikame being angsty and unhappy. Jin is ruining things from the other side of the world. D: