Comments | soucieux: [01/01] Backup Valentine

soucieux

[01/01] Backup Valentine

Feb 14, 2008 19:27

title. Backup Valentine
pairing. pikame, akame (je)
rating. r
summary. kame just got back from seeing jin in nyc. it's valentine's day!
author's note. for the 24 hour valentine's day challenge though finished in a significantly shorter period of time. if i ever try to write jin in la again, please punch me in the face. other fic can be found ( Read more... )

pairing: pikame, fandom: je, drabble and/or unfinished/abandoned, pairing: akame

Comments 38

saturnianlove February 15 2008, 04:45:10 UTC

um, your Yamapi is kind of cool. I mean, really cool :)

soucieux February 15 2008, 21:45:46 UTC

Really?

....really? ♥

darkgloom February 15 2008, 05:59:54 UTC

My poor heart. :((

soucieux February 16 2008, 03:57:10 UTC

♥ maybe things get better. :D

jadedfrenzy February 15 2008, 09:58:40 UTC

My favorite part, the part that made the entire fic for me, was the last line. For some reason, the way Yamapi says this just gets to me, makes me feel a weird combination of sad and proud and understanding and angry. I'm not sure exactly how to feel about it apparently. But it's good. Oh, is it good.

soucieux February 15 2008, 21:49:46 UTC

It's difficult to analyze bc the fic is pretty objective, imo. Mostly dialogue, so it's sort of difficult to really delve into their minds.

Thank you! ♥

pithetaphish February 15 2008, 10:06:17 UTC

Mmmm, angsty anti-Valentine. I like it ^_^

I get the sense that there's a maelstrom of feelings and resentments between these characters; I like that we only get a small taste, just enough to know it's there and to spawn a hundred suppositions and scenarios that might explain it.

Thank you for posting! ^_^

soucieux February 15 2008, 21:05:01 UTC

Well, I could have written more, but I think it worked best as the little scene! There are a lot of vague references, so people can make want they want out of them. I JUST HOPE SOMEONE CHOOSES TO DO THIS FOR THE WHITE DAY REMIX THING because I'd love to see what someone can come up with~~

pithetaphish March 11 2008, 13:06:29 UTC

As someone who is probably remixing this (I NEED TO GET ON THAT GOD HOW DID IT GET TO BE THIS WEEK ALREADY), I hope you enjoy it~~~~~

soucieux March 11 2008, 15:14:29 UTC

WHITE DAY IS IN 2 DAYS. i look forward to it.

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4_03_am February 15 2008, 15:39:09 UTC

I liked that. Yamapi, I liked him, him being, well, not quite 'understanding,' but, it's more like, 'accepting.' I liked that.

soucieux February 15 2008, 21:07:41 UTC

Guh, I'm glad. I've never really written Yamapi. I feel like when the three of them are together, he's the moderate one. Kame is at one extreme and Jin is at the other and Yamapi tries to bring things together.

Thank you for this comment! ♥