Comments | soucieux: [01/01] A Brilliantly Languid Affair

soucieux

[01/01] A Brilliantly Languid Affair

Apr 27, 2007 09:36

title. A Brilliantly Languid Affair
pairing. akame (je)
rating. pg
summary. central park in wintertime is beautiful, i bet.
author's note. before jin came back.
word count. 00510

( It's a brilliantly languid affair. They're in the park together--Central Park--and the sun is far too bright and the sky is far too grey. The snow surrounds them, hardens into ice and they laugh at one another when they take turns slipping on an invisible path. )

fandom: je, drabble and/or unfinished/abandoned, pairing: akame

Comments 14

anamuan April 29 2007, 00:26:49 UTC

I came in for the brilliance of the first sentence and I was not disappointed. Not only was the language constructed beautifully, but the construction of the whole piece was absolutely stunning.
OO <- cookies.

soucieux April 29 2007, 01:00:49 UTC

Ahhh, you read it right before I revised it (but just a little!). ♥ Thank you for reading and liking and I will definitely be taking those cookies of yours. ;D

absenceofmind September 16 2007, 02:47:55 UTC

i feel like i've been really remiss about commenting/reading your fic, somehow? then again i don't really track comms and i apparently didn't have you friended, which i have now rectified XD my flist is surprisingly not very JE-heavy, although that is changing! but thank you for this little gem; kame and jin both felt very plausible and natural, and um, frankly i can never get enough of kame forgiving jin, even though i think he did. but i love it when they have that rapport between them, that silent understanding. i feel like that's what i miss the most =(