The Night That Changed Everything 2

[sophieksian]

Right still not sure about what im doing with this.... if anything. Im new to this even though i have been reading for quite a while. Im gonna try different POV and also a general one. Inevitably its all building up to something thats going to change Sophie's life. But i dont know what yet but anyway.

Comments

[billie_ingrid]

Continue... HAHA! Loving this!

[willow59]

Brilliant writing again, i love this!! :) I really don't know why your not liking it cos its great, your really talented but you just haven't realised it yet!! Don't worry i'll keep telling you cos i want the next chapter......sooon please!! ;) xx

[sophieksian]

im away to start writing up the 3rd part so should be up tomorrow sometime. Just not sure what to write or how to get where im wanting it but i shall! thank you xxx

[siophieforever2]

aww, Siannnnnnnnn, don't cry :'(
Loved it :D

[shelly3080]

Ok now it's my turn to comment for you my friend... Yay well done I love it :) and no matter how rubbish you think it is (which it isn't!!) you will be told otherwise .. Right Willow59?? Haha

who I think can still write one someday:)

Seriously good job great writing II really like it xx

[angelsgirl_17]

I love this! Cant wait to see were u go with it! xxx