Rêver de la Fin
ʚ Title: Rêver de la Fin for coffeeromances ♡
ʚ Pairing(s): Kyungsoo/Chanyeol, broken!Kyungsoo/Jongin
ʚ Rating: PG-13
ʚ Warnings: Character death
ʚ Word Count: 8420
ʚ Summary: It’s a spring blooming day when Kyungsoo meets Park Chanyeol.
ʚ Message for your recipient/author note: I want to thank T for helping me through this and giving me endless support. I also ( Read more... )
ʚ Pairing(s): Kyungsoo/Chanyeol, broken!Kyungsoo/Jongin
ʚ Rating: PG-13
ʚ Warnings: Character death
ʚ Word Count: 8420
ʚ Summary: It’s a spring blooming day when Kyungsoo meets Park Chanyeol.
ʚ Message for your recipient/author note: I want to thank T for helping me through this and giving me endless support. I also ( Read more... )
Comments 1
The characters are built rather nicely, and have very realistic ways of reacting to situations and just in general feel very real, so kudos for that.
To me, it wasn't the ending that felt rushed, but the middle part, which I believe should've been the essence of their relationship, but maybe it's just me.
Other than that, the ending was quite mortifying and made me hollow on the inside, so good job ^^b
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