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[someones_son]

Lily Evans had the most beautiful smile Severus had ever seen, and he was certain there was nothing more painful then watching her smile at James. It was in the way she turned her head just enough to catch Severus in the corner of her eye, and let her half-gaze linger before turning her full attention back to James. He watched her loop

Comments

[took5totakeme]

Ohh very nicely done. I could see so much of it. Very visually stunning, really.

I hope you realize how hard it was to find a journal to comment with that wasn't a Malfoy or Snape ;)

[someones_son]

If it makes you feel better, I will forever owe you one for it.

I don't know if Sev or Luci could have handled, Scoprius reading that...or Leo, or Harry or...

...Pansy would have been funny though.

[proudslytherin]

Well laugh it up then. ;)