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dean/castiel | I would lose my soul the way I do

Apr 02, 2010 00:39

I WOULD LOSE MY SOUL THE WAY I DO
dean/castiel. 5.16, dark side of the moon coda. pg-13. 1,140.
this is your faith, untied before you and ugly.
(c) title from oh me by nirvana

a/n: i needed to write coda fic and, apparently, it had to be done in second person. and without capitals. this is how i deal. update this story is featured in elvisglasses5 lovely ( Read more... )

rating: pg-13, pairing: dean/castiel, fandom: supernatural, type: coda

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devilyouwere April 3 2010, 06:54:36 UTC

No, thank you for the wonderful comment! I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

I will frame those broken pieces, if that's alright :)

olympia_m April 2 2010, 13:58:51 UTC

wonderfully written but extremely painful *deep sigh*

devilyouwere April 3 2010, 06:53:30 UTC

Thank you :) It's definitely what I was aiming for.

lexhibition April 2 2010, 14:10:59 UTC

This left me speechless. I can't believe you actually wrote this; the words all fit together so perfectly it must have just always been. Utterly razor blade gorgeous.

devilyouwere April 3 2010, 06:52:36 UTC

I can't believe I wrote this either! Wait--is that a good disbelief or a bad disbelief?

Well, your comment made me clutch my pearls either way. Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it as much as you did. And speechlessness is good :)

lexhibition April 3 2010, 06:57:29 UTC

Oh, it was good disbelief. Very good disbelief, like awe and amazement that something so perfect can exist. You should be TERRIBLY SMUG about reducing me to such incoherence that I couldn't even express myself properly!

devilyouwere April 3 2010, 07:00:57 UTC

Oh gosh. Well then. I'm not sure how well I am with arrogance and smugness, but I will definitely roll around in the happiness that this comment has brought me. I didn't think I could write something this... moving? I don't know. Just--thank you! ♥

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devilyouwere April 3 2010, 06:51:14 UTC

Thank you so much! I would say I'm sorry, but I like it when people are left a little broken :) I'm glad the writing style worked for you and that you enjoyed it.

painted_pain April 2 2010, 15:57:57 UTC

Dude... you broke whatever was left after 5x16 broke me. That was amaaaaazing!

And that last line? Just, brilliance.

devilyouwere April 3 2010, 06:50:09 UTC

Is it bad that I smiled at your brokenness? I am such a horrible person.

But thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it and that it worked for you.