Alone (1/1)

Aug 28, 2010 05:11

Title: Alone
Author: somehowunbroken 
Fandom: SGA
Characters: Rodney (I know, what?)
Word Count: 806
Rating: G
Prompt: hc_bingo: 'monophobia (fear of being alone).'
Note: I suppose I need a Rodney icon. Sigh. Anyone know where I can find one of him terrified?
ETA: Wow, awesome icon, thanks to theeverdream ! Amazing :)

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rating: g, rodney mckay, hcbingo, stargate

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theeverdream August 29 2010, 04:14:42 UTC
Very powerful, especially the last sentence.
I'm glad for Rodney that John accepts his "nightmares" and being in his quarters.

I made this for an icontest a while ago
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somehowunbroken August 29 2010, 04:31:26 UTC
Oh wow, what a great icon. It's like you knew I was writing this story, or like I saw this at some time and it stuck with me. Or something. :)

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theeverdream August 29 2010, 04:36:54 UTC
I doubt you'd seen it before - I think I only posted it to an icontest comm that is now deleted... and I also kind of doubt my powers of precognition were up to par when I was making that icon, LOL. :D:D

Thinking about your story more, it's so true to life that someone's real weakness or real struggle would be with something emotional over the physical things... no wonder Rodney wouldn't want to share something like that. I'm glad he can hang out in the labs and can hear his next-door neighbours but I feel like he should have a cat (Pegasus almost-cat?) to keep him company in his room... he'd feel a lot better I think. *hugs him*

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somehowunbroken August 29 2010, 04:43:40 UTC
Hm, then I blame Fate. :)

Maybe that's why he had a cat on Earth. It does make sense.

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brasslizard August 30 2010, 03:19:33 UTC
Oh. Oh, wow. This is not a take I've seen on Rodney before but I really, really like it. A lot. Wow. I'd dearly love to see a full on story written around this idea. Excellent character snapshot.

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somehowunbroken August 30 2010, 03:28:05 UTC
Thanks dear :) It's kind of how I've always seen Rodney in my head - so pushy and so always there because he's afraid that if he doesn't make his presence known, everyone will forget about him. Glad you liked it.

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agdrgn September 1 2010, 02:50:43 UTC
Wow. This is very believable - Rodney could hide something like that, I'm sure of it. Beautifully done!

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somehowunbroken September 1 2010, 03:05:34 UTC
Thanks dear :)

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korilian September 14 2010, 22:04:17 UTC
I loved this!

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somehowunbroken September 14 2010, 22:11:26 UTC
Thanks dear! Glad you liked it :)

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duonoaikouka March 5 2011, 05:15:11 UTC
Oh dang... I've got to say that I never pictured this phobia for Rodney before; but this... You just make it work, m'dear! You caught me from paragraph one with the "He’s the one who fills silence with chatter" line. Just thinking, while reading the rest, that Rodney is so lonely for the sound of humanity that he needs to hear his own voice made me tear up, literally. I was cuddling my own pillow by the time I got to him sneaking into John's room just to hear breathing...

Fantastically written and fantastically Rodney. Thanks for sharing this!!!

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somehowunbroken March 5 2011, 05:54:51 UTC
Thanks so much :) I'm glad the charaterisation worked for you!

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