My not-so-triumphant return (Fanfiction)

[soliandxpyne]

Battles Not Won
By Solitaire

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The double doors to his room banged open without warning.

“Sanzo!  That stupid pervy kappa--”

Raising his gun, Sanzo thumbed back the hammer.  “I thought I said I’d kill the next person to step foot in here before morning.”

“Wah, Sanzo, don’t shoot, it’s me!” Goku insisted as he lifted his hands defensively

Comments

[soliandxpyne]

::laughs sheepishly:: I agree 100%! /)A(\ He's totally creepy...but I'm glad you were able to enjoy the story despite (or because of???) that, lol. :D

[jedishampoo]

Actually, it was pretty hot. Who'da known I had a thing for Dougan, until it was brought out into the open here. ;) I like the way you had Sanzo thinking two things at once, the different thoughts, conscious and subconscious, intermingling and confusing each other. Like you say in the story, at times he couldn't tell if he was the shikigami or himself. Very nicely done. Poor Dougan. When I get my Dougan/Sanzo Benny's doujinshi from Japan I'll scan it in honor of you.

[jedishampoo]

Anything for you! I'll make them public somewhere. Should arrive in the next couple of days, I'm hoping. And after reading this, now I sure do hope it's naughty and has lots of Dougan. Course, with Benny's you can usually pretty much rest assured it will be shock-worthy.

[jedishampoo]

Sigh. Sadly, the DJ was not naughty. And usually one can count on Benny's to be completely filthy. Well, the 53 djs I received with it were completely filthy but you ladies probably wouldn't be interested in those. ;)

Anyway, I have still scanned. It's a small copy-book that appears to be the circle/creators fangirling the Requiem movie, with sketches and whatnot. There are some cute lil' pages where they debate the movie's scenes of 9x3, 5x3, and 8x3. And one small Dougan molestering Sanzo.

It's here... http://www.sendspace.com/file/dh60ju

(soliandxpyne, if you don't want the link there, let me know and I'll delete! I really don't know where to post it so...) Enjoy!

[a_mael]

You know, Soli...I read this when it was posted at YTS, and I actually really liked it. I liked it because it was CREEPY. You did a great job of showing Sanzo's divided state and Dougan was...unhinged, at least. Don't worry, m'dear, no one will mistake this for any kind of OTP-cheating! *laughs*

Even if you hate the subject, the execution is quite wonderful.

[soliandxpyne]

LOL, thanks for the encouragement. I've found I often have a hard time writing villains/stalkers, because I just can't understand the mindset of someone like that, and my bad guys tend to end up...unconvincing, or just plain lame. Heh. But I watched some of the more significant Dougan/Sanzo scenes over and over in order to try to get down Dougan's affectation and the way his mind seemed to work, and I'm glad to know I was successful.

(Haha, yes, I just couldn't help trying to slip a little Sanzo/Goku in there where I could. :3)

::is relieved:: Thank you very much, lol.

[candika]

*Shudders* Creepy Dougan is creepy! And dubious consent? I couldn't see a shred of consent in there anywhere. It was a really good fic but please mark it for rape.

*wibbles*

[soliandxpyne]

First off, part of the reason I had such a hard time writing this fic in the first place (excluding the fact that it wasn't 39, lol) was because my first and foremost concern in telling a Saiyuki story is keeping as close to their canon characterizations as possible.

This story threw me into agonies while trying to write it, because the second I received the prompt I knew there was no way I could write this consensually, and I refuse to write rape, period. The possibility of writing it as rape was never viable in my mind; I have zero tolerance for it in fiction of any sort

[candika]

Sorry, I probably over-reacted because this really pushed my buttons and upset me. The chaining up and the aphrodisiac thing was enough to trigger it, I'm afraid.

I'll be more careful next time.

[candika]

OK, less freaked, more reasonable!

First off, part of the reason I had such a hard time writing this fic in the first place (excluding the fact that it wasn't 39, lol) was because my first and foremost concern in telling a Saiyuki story is keeping as close to their canon characterizations as possible.

Absolutely, my problem wasn’t with your characterizations. It was a great fic, in character, hot and chilling at the same time, no easy task. Well done, I’m not criticizing your writing in any way.

This story threw me into agonies while trying to write it, because the second I received the prompt I knew there was no way I could write this consensually, and I refuse to write rape, period. The possibility of writing it as rape was never viable in my mind; I have zero tolerance for it in fiction of any sort.To be absolutely honest, I wouldn’t have minded if you had. If people want or need to write rape I have no problem with that. None at all. My problem is about labeling because some of us have issues around rape (me, for example,

[kansouame]

Whoa.. makes me feel guilty for thinking how hot it was while I read it. The Sanzo shikigami was just way creepy... not that Dougan himself wasn't a little scary either. I adore this little fic.. you want so bad to hate it.. but can't. Nice job.

[soliandxpyne]

Ah ha, how do you think I felt, reading it for the first time since I wrote it? >_>

Want so bad to hate it <-- yeah, I think this was my feeling, too, lol. I'm glad you liked it!