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soliandxpyne

Fanfiction: Wake Up Heart (new chapter finally, omg :O)

Nov 05, 2007 01:39

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Wake Up Heart
By Solitaire

Chapter 3: Expect the...

“...What?”

It seemed Sanzo was slow in coming awake fully, but that was nothing new. Soon enough he would be barking at them to get in the jeep and stop wasting time, so Hakkai resolved to enjoy it while it lasted. Gojyo, on the other hand, was quickly becoming frustrated.

“I asked if you slept well ( Read more... )

fanfic, gojyo/hakkai, sanzo/goku, saiyuki

Comments 55

bootoye November 5 2007, 13:32:37 UTC

I am enjoying this fic.
I love Sanzo and this is certainly an interesting take on the SAnzoxGoku relationship. ^^

I look forward to the rest!

soliandxpyne November 7 2007, 02:33:18 UTC

So glad to hear it!

I definitely believe that Sanzo and Goku belong together, but between Sanzo's personality flaws quirks and Goku's pure inexperience in anything even remotely romantic/sexual (though that could probably go for Sanzo, too, haha), they certainly can't get together through the "well, one thing led to another..." ploy. Hakkai and Gojyo, yes, but not Sanzo and Goku. >:/ ::laughs::

inksheddings November 5 2007, 13:40:45 UTC

Wonderful, wonderful! I do feel slightly sorry for Sanzo, but not that much. *g* A bit more for Goku, actually, poor kid just loves him so darn much.

The scene where Hakkai and Gojyo discuss how in sync Goku and Sanzo are while fighting, wondering if they realize it and all the while they are also fighting in sync...that was priceless. :D

But cliffhanger! No! Dude, that's evil. DX

soliandxpyne November 7 2007, 02:46:20 UTC

Thank you so much! Yes, Sanzo's probably not to be pitied; he needs deserves it. >:d And Goku is all the more adorable for the fact that I don't think he has really worked out the difference between loving someone and being in love, in a sexual way (of course, Sanzo's always a special case of his own when it comes to Goku, anyway).

I'm glad you liked that scene. That was one of my favorite to write, and I actually had that scene written probably by around the time I'd finished writing the first chapter. I think my reaction to seeing Sanzo pull a back-flip in volume 6(?) of the Reload was pretty much the same as Gojyo's. >:3 I just had to put that in there.

Ah ha, well, anyone who has read the original JttW (and remembers it) might have an idea where I'm going with the next chapter. It doesn't strictly follow the main plotline, but I'd decided my plot was too fast-paced and action packed (first time THAT has ever happened in my writing, lol) and there wasn't enough time to let a little bit of romance develop, so...I made time.

avierra November 5 2007, 13:57:42 UTC

Yay! A new chapter ( ... )

soliandxpyne November 7 2007, 03:09:56 UTC

sdfpkvp--! Oh no, I was laughing so hard at the 'humping' comment. TAT I told Xpyne, "Oh jeez, they're not supposed to call me on it!!" ::is still blushing laughing ( ... )

nalanzu November 5 2007, 14:34:05 UTC

I've not read it - yet - but I vote for picking on Sanzo. Which reminds me, that supercilious monk at Yakushi-ji was all, "Now, you've heard of Sanzo Hoshi. Was it a man or a woman? If you say it was a woman, you are sorely mistaken and you watch far too much television without paying any attention whatsoever to history. Sanzo. Was. A. MAN. So there." (Okay, he didn't SAY 'so there', in those words, but the insinuation was there.)

nalanzu November 5 2007, 14:35:05 UTC

...I should have said something along the lines of, "So he was having gay sex with Son Gokuu, then?" except I think my student would have either killed me or died of mortification. Or possibly both.

soliandxpyne November 7 2007, 03:13:45 UTC

HE WAS A MAN, WHO WAS HAVING GAY SEX WITH SON GOKUU. END OF STORY.

XDDD Do we know why they had a woman play Sanzo in the tv show? Possibly so there would be at least ONE woman besides the Merciful Goddess? ...Or perhaps to cement Gokuu's undying love and loyalty towards Sanzo in an appropriately heterosexual way? :P

nalanzu November 8 2007, 00:12:50 UTC

Because it was funnier. :D The Japanese do love their comedy.

geri November 5 2007, 14:51:30 UTC

I must concur with the first two commenters. On the first part and definitely on the second part where every one is fighting in sync hakkaixgoyjo,especialy sanzox goku must be that goku's blood is taking over. I especialy loved the part were sanzo x goku almost got it on. And ejaculating 3 x in 15minutes that must be a world record.**

soliandxpyne November 7 2007, 03:18:43 UTC

LOL! I'm glad you enjoyed this. The fight scene was very fun to write. The tent scene and the scene where Sanzo thinks there's no way he's going to tell Hakkai he was jacking off in the shower...they were horrible to write to my liking, but I was happy with how they finally ended up. :)

And I was originally thinking of writing Sanzo as 4x in the shower, but Xpyne was like, "...No. I really don't think that's possible." ~^_^~ Of course, she's right...but I was just trying to show that Sanzo's libido was pretty far out of his usual range...