lost fic: death did not become you (jack, juliet)

[angeldylan628]

Title: death did not become you
Character(s)/Pairing(s): jack, juliet
Rating:PG-13
Spoilers/Warnings: Spoilers for The Incident. Character death
Summary: She was dead before his feet ever touched sand.
A/N: Written for sacred_20 prompt, prophet and for lost_in_108 prompt, simple

Comments

[missy_useless]

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Oh wow. I love you, seriously. Thank you. This is perfect and gorgeously written and hurts like hell and made me cry - I think I needed this. Amazing work!

[angeldylan628]

Thanks, sweetie! I can't seem to write happy Jack/Juliet. Lord knows I've tried.

[angeldylan628]

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it :)

[silverdragon76]

If she were alive, she’d praise him for his growth.

Yes, she would.

And this:

She was dead before his feet ever touched sand.

Makes me cry.

Thank you for the beautiful Jacket drabble!

[angeldylan628]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it :)

[silverdragon76]

You're welcome!

[valhalla37]

This is so, so fantastic. This, especially, hit a chord -- Death has stripped her of all her defenses - lies and secrecy. The simple truth - she is just another broken woman.

I could not save you Jack whispers against her brow. If she were alive, she’d praise him for his growth. Just gave me shivers, it's so perfect and terrible at the same time. Great job!

[angeldylan628]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it :)

[angela_weber]

Oh, wow. This is so amazing. Every line is so in-character, so perfectly written, but that last one in particular--GUH. The pain is so palpable. Beautiful job!

[angeldylan628]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it :)