Comments | soapboxblues: lost fic: death did not become you (jack, juliet)

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lost fic: death did not become you (jack, juliet)

Nov 23, 2009 12:06

Title: death did not become you
Character(s)/Pairing(s): jack, juliet
Rating:PG-13
Spoilers/Warnings: Spoilers for The Incident. Character death
Summary: She was dead before his feet ever touched sand.
A/N: Written for sacred_20 prompt, prophet and for lost_in_108 prompt, simple

( they leave him alone with a dead body )

table:sacred_20, pairing: jack/juliet, character: jack shepherd, character: juliet burke

Comments 14

colourmayfade November 24 2009, 04:21:22 UTC

Oh, my... the sadness! This is really gorgeous, and the last line was completely unexpected but also kind of enlightening. Great work!

angeldylan628 November 24 2009, 06:34:42 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it :)

ozmissage November 24 2009, 14:02:59 UTC

Oh man. This packs such a punch, it's beautifully written and completely wrenching. That last line in particular just broke me. Amazing job.

angeldylan628 November 26 2009, 03:52:32 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it :)