Comments | so_say_we_all: Hubris, or the Downfall of Helena Cain, part 3

wyrdwritere in so_say_we_all

Hubris, or the Downfall of Helena Cain, part 3

Aug 16, 2007 21:34

Author's Note: Some of the dialogue here was taken from the actual show and modified to suit my dramatic purposes. Battlestar Galactica is not my creation, and I make no attempt to usurp the rights and privileges of its creators...though I flatter myself that I outdo them in some respects.

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author: wyrdwritere, helena cain, jack fisk, kara thrace, capt. mara quisling, original character, col. tigh, felix gaeta, admiral adama, lee adama, hubris, dee, laura roslin, gaius baltar, doc cottle

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coexist_love August 17 2007, 03:35:50 UTC

OH MAN!!! WHY DIDN'T THIS HAPPEN ON THE SHOW!!! :P

wyrdwritere August 17 2007, 05:51:47 UTC

So I could savor your praise all by myself. Thanks for commenting.

coexist_love August 17 2007, 06:04:05 UTC

haha!

you're welcome...

I could just see Laura not being lucid and having Cain say "you're under my protection" and freaking out even though she was too weak to do anything.

wyrdwritere August 17 2007, 15:16:31 UTC

Yes. There was a point where Cain says something, and I couldn't think of a response, and it occurred to me that since Laura is messed up on drugs and cancer and near-death experiences, maybe she couldn't, either. I don't think Cain could have gotten away with this if Laura wasn't really ill.

btw, I like the cartoon on your profile page. :)

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cerebel August 23 2007, 19:23:34 UTC

...I'm with coexist_love. This should have happened on the series, yo.

Excellent chapter :)

wyrdwritere August 24 2007, 06:09:10 UTC

Thanks. Let's hope I can avoid screwing up the ending. :O