Fic: Clutch

[so_egregious]

Hi everyone! I finally finished this little...so-and-so, and I thought you might like to read. Or maybe not. God knows I'm sick of it. ;)

Cross-posted several places, as usual.

Title: Clutch
Author: C, aka so_egregious
Rating: PG-13.
Word Count: 1,932.
Pairing: John/Paul
Warnings: Language, mentions of drugs, implied sexual situation.
Disclaimer: This

Comments

[pauliejohnny1]

Brilliant! Well your fic's are always fantastic, I really enjoyed it,cant wait for more from you, your writing is amazing,your characterization is spot on.
Fab, Fab, Fab, Fab.
Hey that's four fabs for you.*Fab four*, there is a joke there somewhere, haha 8D

[so_egregious]

How nice of you! Thanks a lot; I'm so happy you enjoy all my little offerings here. And yes, four fabs is just perfect, no matter what you're talking about. ;)

[iburiedjohn]

I think I'm definitely going to have to tell someone to shut their cunting gob today.

As always, your story has made my day.

[so_egregious]

I support this idea. Make sure you also call them a fucking failure. I'm sure it'll go over like gangbusters. If not, though, I'm in no way responsible. ;)

As always, thanks so so much!

[macca44552]

Hey, I never dropped you a line on your other fics, but I just wanted to say that I absolutely love this!!!!

[so_egregious]

Thank you so much! I really appreciate it. Drop a line anytime; we're always open! :)

[bello_romantico]

As per usual, your work is flawless - I love it when you write in John's voice because, when I read it, it always feels like I'm actually inside his head... To top it all off, you wrote in the second person (which is so freaking difficult!) and it flowed wonderfully! Wow! My (imaginary) hat is tipped to you!

What else can I say? You never cease to impress... This was incredibly hot and I loved the ending - loved it, loved it, loved it. I like the Audrey Hepburn - Paul connection; two of my favorite people. :)

Thank you for this! You mentionned that you were sick of this piece and I can't imagine why - it was wonderful!

[so_egregious]

Oh, dear Kat, you are always such a sweetheart. Thanks as always for your kindness and for checking this out. I always love hearing from you. :)

The piece always chooses its own voice. I wish I could say I'm this great planner, but like John I'm always a bit off the cuff. If I start in second person present tense...well, that's how it's gonna be. ;)

I like it and all; you know how you just reread to death sometimes? That's where I was with this. That, and I have a hard time writing anything even remotely "sexy." For an old married lady, I blush like a fiend. ;)

[hihopes1964]

Amazing. It all worked so well and you captured them so perfectly. I too love the Audrey Hepburn-Paul connection. Good idea.

I particually loved the line
"“Geo, you fuckin’ failure, you failed us all. Get your prick in your hand or shut your cunting gob. Those are your options, love.”"

[so_egregious]

Thanks a lot! I'm not sure where the Audrey/Paul thing came from, but it seemed to work and I'm so happy you dug it.

Confession: that line makes me laugh too. ;)

Thank you again!