New Fic: Staying Power

Sep 28, 2008 23:37

Caro let us know that the 2008 Donate An Orgasm To Moonridge anthology has timed out, so here is my contribution:

Title: Staying Power
Category: Slash (J/B)
Rating: FRAO
Warnings: some mild BDSM (being tied up)
Word count: 1,544
Summary: Things get exciting for Blair when the tables get turned.

A/N: Yeah, just smut. Smut and a touch of angst.

Staying Power )

ts slash fic, moonridge

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lit_gal September 29 2008, 03:42:00 UTC
Oh, that is wonderful. The smut is damn good, but the ending... *sob* Oh, I am a sucker for stories where Jim realizes how close he came to losing the best thing in his life.

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snycock October 1 2008, 03:49:23 UTC
Aw, thank you! I think it'll be a long time before Jim lets himself forget that particular lesson...

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callistosh65 September 29 2008, 05:44:34 UTC
Sooooo good. Just beautifully done. Love the way you have Jim turning Blair on while he's sentinel-testing him.. Heh. Sweet-hot way to turn the tables.*g* And that moment of anxiety at the end for Jim.. :: happy sigh:: Thoroughly enjoyed this, thank you for posting it up.

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snycock October 1 2008, 03:51:17 UTC
*G* Don't you just know Jim's been waiting for a chance to do his own testing...

Thank you for the lovely feedback!

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mab_browne September 29 2008, 07:25:48 UTC
The sex is great and the intensity of it is wow, but what makes this story for me is the little moment of anxiety and tenderness at the end. :-)

(Less than two weeks to go. I'm starting this insane and annoying countdown in my head...)

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snycock October 1 2008, 03:52:16 UTC
It's like salt in cooking - just a little touch of angst to flavor things...

Thank you very much for the kind words

(and, yay, less than two weeks!... squeeeeeee!)

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karieflybabe September 29 2008, 12:33:06 UTC
Loverly...

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snycock October 1 2008, 03:52:35 UTC
Thanks so much, hon! :-)

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janedavitt September 29 2008, 13:35:51 UTC
Love the shift of mood as Jim remembers and they comfort each other.

And love the description of how Blair's feeling; so lyrical, so intense, and Jim's so very focused ::g:;

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snycock October 1 2008, 03:54:56 UTC
Thanks very much for the lovely compliments!

And, yes, Jim can be VERY focused under the right conditions...*G*

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