New Fic: Staying Power

[snycock]

Caro let us know that the 2008 Donate An Orgasm To Moonridge anthology has timed out, so here is my contribution:

Title: Staying Power
Category: Slash (J/B)
Rating: FRAO
Warnings: some mild BDSM (being tied up)
Word count: 1,544
Summary: Things get exciting for Blair when the tables get turned.

A/N: Yeah, just smut. Smut and a touch of angst.

Comments

[aprilvalentine]

Wow -- I repeat -- wow. That was hot... and the lovely angsty bit as Jim worried at the end and felt guilty was a nice touch.

Ahem... I need to turn on a fan and cool down!

[snycock]

Thank you! I couldn't resist a touch of angst at the end...

And, ooh, I LOVE your icon!

[t_verano]

So very, very, hot ("Please, he mouthed soundlessly against Jim’s neck, and again as Jim turned his head and his lips found Blair’s. Please." ::quivers::)... And so solidly and smoothly and beautifully written, and them.

I love the detail; the fleece lining of the cuffs being sweaty against his damp skin, Jim's observations. And Blair's snorted "Of course Jim could hear him breathing. He’d been panting so heavily that Mrs. Cheever, the elderly lady who lived in #305 and wore hearing aids in both ears, could probably hear him." And how much pleasure Jim takes in that “Not yet, my little guppy. I’ve got a few more tests to run.” :-)

And the Jim-angst at the end, oh yeah. Lovely. Just lovely. Your fic always makes me so happy...

[snycock]

Hi! ::waves at you madly:: It's so good to see you!

Aw, you're so sweet, as always. Thank you for the lovely and so very thoughtful feedback! I thought you might like that bit where Blair whispers against Jim's neck. I don't know what it is about Caro's Moonridge anthologies, but they totally bring out the smut writer in me...*G* Definitely a good thing.

Hope you and your family are doing well...

[lisafeld]

Wow, that was seriously hot! I love how you kept drawing it out, using so many ways of describing what Blair's experiencing, and the thought of Jim running tests on Blair is a great twist. But I especially loved how you brought it back to character at the end, with Jim freaking out, and the tenderness between them. You're seriously awesome.

[snycock]

Aw, gosh, thank you so much! I'm completely blushing at your wonderful feedback. :-) There's just something about Caro's orgasm challenge that inspires me, I guess...*G*

[thismaz]

Wow.
And ugh.
and wow again.
*g*
And the ending... lovely.

[snycock]

*g*

Thank you! I'm really glad it worked for you!