Part 2, sparkling madness and much needed comfort. Please enjoy the cutest two sparklings ever and a horny Jazz begging Prowl for a sparkling of their own.
Title: Starscream's Fate
Chapter: Chapter 2 of 5
Fandom: Transformers (G1)
Disclaimer: I do not any of the characters but I do own the plot bunny( with the help of Misy_Mina). Transformers does not
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Another wonderful chapter. I love how you keep the sparklings so cuddlicious (is that even a word?. XD )
Just one thing, I've noticed a few, careless grammar mistakes. Like you haven't read through your chapter before you posted it.
For example, you wrote Perceptor's name wrong and typed 'Preceptor' instead.
Ok, I don't say I'm not making any mistakes, I have my fair share of them. -_-
But sometimes it helps to reread the chapter. (You don't have to overdo it like me, ...like 5 - 10 times. ^_^U Guess that's why I take so long to post my stories. uhm hehe... -.-U )
Besides, how come I haven't seen this on FF-net? You should post it. ^^ I guess many will think alike and just want to 'kidnap' the sparklings. XD
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Thanks for the warning lol, I know I'm very lazy and I hate to admit it but I probably should read over my work some more. Thanks for the reminder and I'll fix it as soon as I can promises.
I'll post it on ff.net soon; I just need to open an account there. Probably around tomorrow or so.
*clears throat* Kidnapping charges is hereby declined just for you; you may keep them for tonight.
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Starscream should have a pacifier as well. ^^ It would look soooo adorable. XD Like this. -> http://shiroineko-sama.deviantart.com/gallery/?offset=264#/d88tlc
Somehow I keep imagining now that little Inferno will run around yelling he will be (or is) a firefighter! Like that one cartoon we had on tv long ago, 'Grisu the firefighter' XD
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Little widdle, Ferno. Yup, he's going to run around and scream he is a firefighter and douse Wheeljack in water! Thanks for the idea, I'll see where I can look into it.
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