English homework

[snoopy48]

I know this is long but please read this its my story for my english project I really want some feedback!!!!

"Best Friends" by Abbey Larson

The door screeched open; a chilling scream came from the shadows in the hallway. A scream so loud it shook the TV screen.

I reached down to grab the popcorn from the greasy bowl and the phone rang I shook with

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[andidremptofyou]

:O
that was amazing.