Challenge 28: Home

Oct 20, 2006 15:18

Title: none. suggestions welcome.
Author: irisgirl12000
Rating: PG-13
Word count: 2x100
Disclaimer: Not mine. As if!
Challenge: #28, home

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jadzia7667 October 20 2006, 21:10:58 UTC
I like this. No idea for a title, but I can feel the tension draining out of Harry as he gets closer to bed.

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asimplechord October 21 2006, 02:17:42 UTC
:) He's had a hard day at work, and is so relieved to be home. It doesn't even matter that Severus is asleep, it's important that he's there.

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lilyeyes October 20 2006, 21:57:07 UTC
Finally comes to mind as a title - (you know how I suck at these) but I loved the drabbles!

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asimplechord October 21 2006, 02:11:20 UTC
Titles are the worst! I seriously consider just naming them whatever the prompt-word is. :)

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alisanne October 21 2006, 01:42:05 UTC
Actually, they fit this week's prompt, too. :) Lovely.

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alisanne October 21 2006, 01:43:38 UTC
Oops, it WAS for this week's prompt, it's just that you had "touch" up as the prompt... *sigh*
Never mind me, I'm delirious from lack of sleep.

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asimplechord October 21 2006, 01:52:02 UTC
I'm an idiot! I wrote this last night, but had no internet connection, and quick tried to post from work without getting into trouble, and typed the wrong word. It's meant for HOME. Fixing. :)

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robriki October 21 2006, 02:06:48 UTC
Love them!!

His smug=his mug?

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asimplechord October 21 2006, 02:09:40 UTC
D'oh! That's what I get for posting in a hurry from a computer that I shouldn't use for fanfic! Thanks for letting me know! :)

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Snarry untitled koshweasley October 21 2006, 04:55:59 UTC
This sounds so very comfortable. And I love how you tell which is which, with out telling. Excellently done.

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Re: Snarry untitled asimplechord October 27 2006, 11:34:50 UTC
Thanks! Haven't we all had that kind of day at least once? :)

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Re: Snarry untitled koshweasley October 27 2006, 12:41:10 UTC
Once? At least dozens of times:)

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