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Love what you've done to the world!xikumMay 4 2004, 18:03:45 UTC
Quite enjoy what you've done to the world in just 7 days ;) Hmm...Does Malfoy get to be Prime Minister, with Harry & Sev as the new co-rulers? Forget about a ministry, stick to a beneficent dictatorship?
Can't wait to see what you do with it! I have been both surprised at times, and delighted always, with the WW you've created.
I got blindsided by this. I would never have guessed that Harry and Severus were already in a relationship. I loved Severus telling Harry he had to hide from the new Dark Lord and his line “So, you are now in charge of the world, brat? - Just be careful with it.” Even though Harry took on this role, Severus' trust of him is evident. This is a very creative story and I am anxious for more. Well done.
He gasped and a tongue sneaked it's way into his mouth, tasting so much of Harry.
Was so surprised and excited to read that! "tasting so much of Harry." Love it. I didn't see that coming. Love that after all Severus has been through, he gets right back into his loverly snarkyness. He's great.
*waves* I thought that I'd point out parts that I liked in this chapter! - So, instead of risking it, he grabbed the soft thing on top oh him - cover, his mind somehow supplied - and tried to vanish beneath it completely. I like that his mind tells him that it's a cover. - He must have dozed off a bit, because he woke up when a pair of soft, achingly familiar lips met his. He gasped and a tongue sneaked it’s way into his mouth, tasting so much of Harry. It would be interesting to know how Severus and Harry became a couple. - Startled, Severus looked into the familiar green eyes. Saw the truth in them. And the insecurity. Noted how tense Harry had become, waiting for his response. I love Harry's insecurities here and that they are centered on Severus' reaction and acceptance.
Maybe someday I'll write how they got together. If I'm struck by inspiration...
And Harry's insecure because he and Sev spent years fighting a Dark Lord - and now Harry's bedome one himself... simply wouldn't do to have the person you did it all for hate you.
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Hmm...Does Malfoy get to be Prime Minister, with Harry & Sev as the new co-rulers? Forget about a ministry, stick to a beneficent dictatorship?
Can't wait to see what you do with it! I have been both surprised at times, and delighted always, with the WW you've created.
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a lot of people didn't see that coming, you're not in bad company.
Thanks for the praise!
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Was so surprised and excited to read that! "tasting so much of Harry." Love it. I didn't see that coming. Love that after all Severus has been through, he gets right back into his loverly snarkyness. He's great.
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- So, instead of risking it, he grabbed the soft thing on top oh him - cover, his mind somehow supplied - and tried to vanish beneath it completely. I like that his mind tells him that it's a cover.
- He must have dozed off a bit, because he woke up when a pair of soft, achingly familiar lips met his. He gasped and a tongue sneaked it’s way into his mouth, tasting so much of Harry. It would be interesting to know how Severus and Harry became a couple.
- Startled, Severus looked into the familiar green eyes. Saw the truth in them. And the insecurity. Noted how tense Harry had become, waiting for his response. I love Harry's insecurities here and that they are centered on Severus' reaction and acceptance.
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And Harry's insecure because he and Sev spent years fighting a Dark Lord - and now Harry's bedome one himself... simply wouldn't do to have the person you did it all for hate you.
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