Writing Fiction is done!

[snapefan87]

Well I finished my Writing Fiction portfolio. 32 pages. I posted my first story Storm last night. So here is my other one...Christmas Cheer. I don't care if it sucks, it's done. I posted it a month or two ago but it has been totally revamped...so give it another read.

Christmas Spirit

Teddy went to the changing room and got out of his Santa

Comments

[baileysicecream]

i like this one better than the first version. i have some grammar things for you, if you haven't turned it in yet :O)

ps i'm impressed. and jealous. i can't write creatively for crap.

[snapefan87]

Aww thanks ^-^ Sadly I have turned it in...it was due yesterday...didn't proof read, I had no time. But thanks for reading glad you liked it :D