For: sometimeshatter

Aug 11, 2009 14:26

For: sometimeshatter
Title: Counting
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Naruto, being slightly dense, jumps to conclusions.
Warnings: boysexing (but isn't that what everyone's here for? lol). Naruto cries, if that bothers some people.
A/N: I rushed this (because I'm a bad, bad person and I can't help but procrastinate) so it didn't turn out fantastic, but I adore gullible/ ( Read more... )

rating: nc-17, summer 2009, submission: fic

Leave a comment

Comments 28

nilladriel August 16 2009, 07:20:51 UTC
Alright. The Iruka/Anko ALONE makes this fic absolutely brilliant, imo.

"But he won't talk about it! Like, ever!" Naruto pouted.

This... about sums up Sasuke, alright. xD I love Naruto in this, he's so... reactionary! Spastic! Cute! And just ♥ And Sasuke is just so bratty but nngh.

But that last line... just... god. I mean, the fic made me laugh the entire way through and then I got to that last line and just *-* SO. SWEET. It made the fic imo.

Reply

oceansex September 1 2009, 02:12:56 UTC
YES. ANOTHER IRUANKO FAN? XD <3333

I'm very glad to hear you liked the last line! thank you for reading!

Reply


cupricanka August 18 2009, 17:30:34 UTC
Iruka and Anko? I really like that - though it would probably be for the better if her advice-giving career ends here, before someone gets seriously hurt.

Fun story, I enjoyed reading it.

Reply

oceansex September 1 2009, 02:13:33 UTC
yes, I agree. Anko as advice giver is a very, very bad idea lol

thank you for reading! <3

Reply


frostheavens August 28 2009, 00:11:58 UTC
Latest comment ever, sorry!

ajshjkasfh I'm sorry I didn't read this sooner, but it's perfect! Naruto jumping to conclusions, Sasuke not helping one inch, Sakura being the go-to girl. I loved the humour! The lack of communication! How IC everyone was! And the numerical details! The ending is perfect ♥ I don't know who you are, but when I do, I will be stalking you like a boss.

Reply

oceansex September 1 2009, 02:16:07 UTC
it's totally fine! any comment is love <3

LET THE STALKING COMMENCE-- I mean, *ahem*, very glad to hear you liked so much about this! I'm super happy that you found everyone IC especially. <3

Reply


phlogistics September 6 2009, 01:40:15 UTC
This was awesome. XD

Reply

oceansex September 6 2009, 01:52:15 UTC
<3

Reply


nhimcon2 January 29 2016, 12:04:58 UTC
omg this is so amazing thank you thank you thank you!!!! (even though it's probably 7 years too late for this)

Reply


Leave a comment

Up