For: sometimeshatter

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For: sometimeshatter
Title: Counting
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Naruto, being slightly dense, jumps to conclusions.
Warnings: boysexing (but isn't that what everyone's here for? lol). Naruto cries, if that bothers some people.
A/N: I rushed this (because I'm a bad, bad person and I can't help but procrastinate) so it didn't turn out fantastic, but I adore gullible/

Comments

[oceansex]

I'm so happy to hear you think so! ^_^ I've always preferred humor to angst, so most of my stuff comes out as funny (or at least, I hope it's funny lol).

[ylmik_wisty]

AWWW, NARUTO XDDDDDDDDDD
I loved this misunderstanding, that was hilariously them. I love how Sasuke is sulky and angry and Naruto's just freaking out and bawling because he has no idea what's going on ROFL
Anyway. Comedic duo. lolll

[oceansex]

thank you! I imagine much of their relationship is made up solely of stupid arguments/misunderstandings, and then incredibly hot make-up sex. XD

[dedkake]

^__^ wonderful words about boys who just can't communicate properly.

i love it.

[oceansex]

thank you! :3

[questofdreams]

THIS IS BRILLIANT XD

Iruka's SECRET NIGHTLIFE WITH ANKO LOL <3

And Naruto's antics in his quest to find out how to fix their relationship and then breaking down at Sakura's--I started getting wooby until Naruto came out with "it better not be Kiba," and then I just laughed XDDD

And Sasuke blowing Sakura's door in HAHAHAAH and Sakura's reaction XDD I LOVE THIS XD

Naruto wasn't entirely sure what infidelity meant, but he was getting seriously pissed off at this point.

I love how the moment I start feeling my chest hurt, YOU MAKE ME LAUGH INSTEAD XDDD

Smut was so hot o___o and the ending!! Awww ;__; This was such a wonderful fic!

I CAN'T WAIT TO FIND OUT WHO YOU ARE!!! I FEEL LIKE I SHOULD KNOW THIS WRITING D8

[oceansex]

WHY THANK YOU. 8D

I... I ship Iruka/Anko SO SHAMELESSLY. they're totally doing it. every night. in public restrooms. BECAUSE IT'S HOT OKAY?!

like I mentioned above, I CAN'T KEEP SERIOUS FOR TOO LONG. I have this impulsive almost-need to toss in funny bits to keep the mood light. I can do angst, but I much prefer silliness.

ffffff this was my first EXPLICIT fic with buttsecks, so I'm really glad it came out hot rather than awkward. XD

YES YOU SHOULD. >8| HOW COULD YOU NOT KNOW WHO I AM? I AM HURT. ;A; (LAWL JUST KIDDING~ <33)

[questofdreams]

LOL I COULD TOTALLY GET BEHIND THE SHIP BECAUSE IT'S JUST TOO FUNNY NOT TO XD Oh Iruka <3

IT'S OKAY, SOMETIMES BUTTSECKS IS OVERRATED... FROTTING FTW? lol

I'M TOTALLY LOOKING FORWARD TO CATCHING UP ON YOUR FIC, D000D *_*

[ladygizarme]

Eeee~ this was wonderful! The whole misunderstanding is just so them, especially when the truth of it all comes out. I giggled madly for a moment there. XD I could quote what everyone else quoted, because that line was LOL funny, and a nice tension-breaker, but instead...

I told you before. I don't -- and I mean, really, really do not -- want to know about your sex life. Ino probably wouldn't mind hearing about it, though.

and

"Nn--" Sasuke grunted before letting out an embarrassing cry -- well, it would be later; right now neither of them could really think about it much

were a couple of my favs. And, holy crap, that sex was hot. And the counting tie-in at the beginning and end was just wonderful. &hearts

[oceansex]

thank you! several of Sakura's lines are my favorites, so glad to hear you found that one amusing, too. Cx

the first line of the fic took the longest to come up with, and as soon as I had it, the rest of the fic just kind of flowed out of me. the various numbers were really fun to throw in there. XD

and I'm still a little surprised that so many people liked the sex, because as I've mentioned above a couple times, I'd never written any super explicit slash before. but I guess all the het smut was good practice lol.