for: luleeta

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From: fireun
Title: Expressive
Rating: PG13
Summary: The little things sometimes have the biggest impact.
Warnings: mild sexual content
A/N: I hope you enjoy!
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Comments

[luleeta]

This is my favorite fic in the exchange, and no, I am not biased. :D
I love this author anon! The ways you've shown how the boys have matured, and yet still so recognizably them - the tension, how Sasuke was careful to not push too much too fast (since that wouldn't achieve what he wants), how Naruto pushed back , and the language! Everything flows so well and there was several parts where I went- "Yes. This is them ".
In short, I adore my gift and am very very grateful. I think you've incorporated all my kinks in there and, and you're just awesome, ok?

[sowell]

This is lovely. It's nice to see Sasuke chase Naruto for once.

[rosalui]

This was lovely. :D

[gonrie]

Really good :)
The characterization flowed quite nicely and I love how their actions were simple but simply *them* :)

[transient_words]

Oh <3

I've seen so many fics where Sasuke doesn't have to work to regain Naruto's trust and it's Naruto who has to, with a great deal of patience and understanding, try to re-establish their relationship.

So this was a very nice change. I really liked your older, less innocent Naruto who's wary of Sasuke's movements, but is still the Naruto we know and love. I like that he doesn't take Sasuke's antics for granted, but is angered and demands explanations for them.

Sasuke is believable here, too.

I really like the ending, too.