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From: fireun
Title: Expressive
Rating: PG13
Summary: The little things sometimes have the biggest impact.
Warnings: mild sexual content
A/N: I hope you enjoy!
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Comments

[itzakukulkan]

This was just beautiful and touching. Thanks for sharing.

[crimson_rising]

Love it.

"It sent a surge of adrenaline and anticipation through Sasuke, curled his lips into the bastard cousin of a proper smile."

Definitely one of my favorite lines of the piece :)

[anonymous]

That was rather lovely. Sasuke's quiet thought process and Naruto's actions were so very on par with their characters. I just have a question, wondering if something was cut out or if it was intentionally left out in the last section.

"It was movement forward, Sasuke nipping lightly at the back of Naruto’s neck, soothing with lip and tongue, and he could hear the smile in Naruto’s involuntary exclamations, in the way Naruto reached a hand out and clasped his.

dug into flesh, just as frantic as before, but with far different intent. Sasuke soaked in the way Naruto arched his back, mouth open and eyes closed, at the way Naruto’s fingers scrabbled at his back and buttocks, scratching and grasping."

Wasn't sure if you meant to start mid sentence and leave it like that to maintain the feel of the story or if something accidentally got cut out. Either way it was a very enjoyable read.