Benji Himura (Kaosu)

[smsues]

Updated: 7-10-07

Title: Outcast Saga Lost in Sailor Moon world (This story also comes in Sakura Taisen, Ranma ½, Tenchi Muyo, Ragnarok Online, Naruto, and El Hazard flavors and an unfinished uncensored version for “explicit sex scenes” and “sexual related omakes”.)
Writer: Benji Himura
Summary: “This is a second universe for my Outcast story

Comments

[sailormac]

Female tentacle monster? Isn't that an *enormous* contradiction in terms?

[glowing_sunset]

That... wow. My brain hurts.

[mozarteffect]

Name: Benji Himura

Wasn't there a show back in the 70s about a dog named Benji? *snort*

Unusual Markings/Colorations: Tall, dark, handsome, and well-built.

*eyeroll* I tire of that description; what on Earth is 'dark' supposed to mean, anyway?

A palm top, a CD player, a CD case, a photo album and a battery charger back in the bag and the combat knife is in front of him, there are five metal rods of thirty centimeters each with a screw tip placed beside the other, the two tekkos are near of the rods one beside the other, there is a long and slender knife on the proper sheath near of the tekkos and metal baton.”

Okay, he has some technology that isn't quite there yet in the time Sailor Moon is set in (I presume 90s, and yes I am disregarding Ami's palmtop because it's apart of her Senshi uniform) and...weapons? Without a license or a means to use them? I'm especially leery about those knives, don't they place heavy restrictions on those?

Brazil, his mom is half Japanese and half Brazilian and his father is half Brazilian and half

[akastreakychan]

This story is a hot mess. And the "hot" part is debateable.

"Intimate absorbent?" Back in my day, we used to call 'em pads! At least, I hope they're pads. Sticking a tampon into an open wound might be problematic. And the tentacle monster? Geez louise.

Other than that, this sounds like typical, vagely-misogynistic stuthor shit.

[tsubomi]

...Wow... that writing... is terrible. I think this is the worst I've seen here so far... O_o...