Raven

[smsues]

Title: So are you
Writer: CatStar14
Canon: Translated manga?
Rating: 2

Name: Raven
Senshi Title: Not mentioned
Species: Puella angstia
Hair: Bluish black or raven, long
Eyes: Sharp deep green
Unusual Markings/Colorations: Pale skin
Possessions: None
Guardians: Tiger, a black and white striped puppy.

Origin: Her parents abandoned her

Comments

[inheritancesues]

. . . How does "princess Cat" turn into "Raven"? Does she just really like animals? And Beryl's best friend? I mean, it could happen, but why would it?

Raven hastily stepped away form him wiping away her tears, "I'm sorry for that Darien, it's my fault. If I hadn't been here blubbering, you never would have forgotten" she started to cry again.

Yes, it is all your fault. Go dig yourself a hole and die in it.

[fullmetalsues]

"Tell me about yourself, the only thing I know about you is that your name is Raven and that you have a dog-named, Tiger.

I just love her creativity with punctuation, don't you? That hyphen/comma set there really brings so much more meaning to the story.

The correct words seem to be on vacation, so she invented new definitions for their homophones. Her creativity just abounds.

-___- the first time i saw your username, I thought it was S&M sues.

[smsues]

-___- the first time i saw your username, I thought it was S&M sues.

I knew someone was going to do that eventually. XD

[anonymous]

Wow, I'm the person who wrote this. And I completely agree with everything you guys are saying. Reading this story is like watching a home video of yourself when you were little and wondering if you really sounded like that. This fic was horrible and I never want to see it again. But, I'm not going to delete it because its a reminder of how far I've come as a writer. But, yeah....I didn't even know this was here. (I googled my screename and this came up.) One last thing though before I go...I DO like commas. I think I'm pretty good with them now. Not perfect, but good. ;-D