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Amara Lee (Sailor Earth) and the Ai Tenshi and Yume Tenshi Senshi

May 26, 2006 00:20

These characters also have profiles that go with them, which I have posted with the samples. I didn't include everything in the profiles in the entry... since this story already confuses the crap out of me.

Title: Yasashii Yoake
Writer: Ashleigh Kaiba and Bunny Aino
Canon: Anime and Sera Myu, Yugi-Oh, and a small sprinkling of elements from ( Read more... )

author responses, crossover canon character/oc, star, crossover, unusual guardians, knight, earth, 4, hotaru's brother, constellation, titanium kerokko's relative, misc.

Comments 13

kyouketsusha May 26 2006, 14:53:51 UTC

Megami(beautiful).

If by "beautiful" you mean "goddess".

Usagis(Bunnies!)!

Dear all fangirls, JAPANESE WORDS DO NOT PLURALISE WITH -S. THANK YOU.

This fanfic hurts my brain.

sleeves May 26 2006, 17:58:01 UTC

I SECOND THIS COMMENT.

hempfandango May 26 2006, 16:49:13 UTC

I want to believe Hoshino Megami is a troll. This is the fifth time I've seen her donate one of her OCs to a fic like this, and they are all so terrible. Sailor Misuteri is all kinds of wtf.

"She's related to water! She has water attacks and water colours for her outfits and gets her strenght from water and her family's name means water! Water water water water!! Oh and she turns into a wolf :DDDD"

Because... wolves are so closely associated with water, I guess.

smsues May 26 2006, 20:47:36 UTC

I don't think she's a troll. She just seems like one of those people that just doesn't listen when you tell her that her OCs are bad. (Probably because of all of her friends telling her otherwise.)

Can I have the links to those stories?

hempfandango May 28 2006, 02:40:32 UTC

Weird, I can't find them anymore. That's too bad, because I remember one being a LoTR/SM crossover that (I think) involved the next generation of senshi. I believe her character was the next Sailor Mercury. Sorry. :/

ninjitsu_x June 26 2006, 20:48:29 UTC

If you weren't such a bitch and would kindly point out some criticism that would help them, then they would have been more than glad to accept your criticism?

inheritancesues May 26 2006, 23:59:45 UTC

The languages . . . the profiles . . . the PAIN and HORROR!!!

mimisgrotto June 4 2006, 09:16:26 UTC

Sweet sporking Jebus, it's like a SUE/STU SMORGASBOARD!

I want to doll them, but this would run unto the DOZENS if I take all outfits into account. Senshi fuku or 'princess dresses', it's all so wonderfully baaaaad..... /_\

How Sad Are You? anonymous June 25 2006, 13:51:40 UTC

You go around looking for Sue's on the internet? How S.A.D that really is pathetic isn't it? I mean going on and complaining about people's apparent Mary-Sue's. Who the hell died and made you the queen of the goddamn world, did you ever consider that Ashleigh-Kaiba and Bunny Aino were having 'FUN' with their fic and not writing another fucking betrayal plot or the overly annoying Usagi is centre of the world fic. And just for your information I was personally enjoying this fic do you know why? Because the author updates, had pairings for the Inners and Outers and actually had a decent enemy and original ideas unlike most authors so why don't you take your emo trash somewhere else, no one cares if you found a Sue.