"Questions" - A Gift for mandyloo

Jul 26, 2010 07:59

Title: Questions
Author: princessgilly
Gift For: Mandyloo
Summary: little bit of Rose and Scorpius through their younger years.
Rating: PG
Warnings: None
Word Count: 2,466
Lyrics/Quotes Used:I was inspired by both ( Read more... )

author:princessgilly, fic, rating:pg, round three

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Comments 11

drcjsnider July 26 2010, 15:29:09 UTC
Awe.. this was so sweet. I hate that we don't get to see MORE, but the place where you ended gives the story a very hopeful feeling that fits well with how you set it up :)

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darth_kittius July 26 2010, 15:49:00 UTC
Very cute! Well done building up to the end!

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annaw135 July 26 2010, 15:50:12 UTC
Adorable! I like the way Rose is different than how a lot of stories portray her--more friendly and less worried about school. The buildup to the relationship was great, too, and I liked how it ended, even though I wish I could see how it continued after!

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mollywheezy July 26 2010, 19:19:20 UTC
I absolutely ADORED this!

I loved your characterizations of both Rose and Scorpius. You did a very good job creating them as individuals, who while maybe inheriting a trait or two from what we know of their parents, have their own distinct personalities.

I enjoyed the story from each year of school showing the development of their friendship. And while I wanted to read more, I thought you chose an excellent point to end, leaving it open-ended and hopeful with the promise for more.

Great job! :D

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incandescent July 27 2010, 02:46:22 UTC
This is beautiful. I love the relationship between Rose and Scorpius. It's delicate and absolutely perfect. You've provided such wonderful characters and atmosphere that I have no difficulty believing that this is what really happened. I also admire your restraint in this story. You've taken it to the perfect ending, and no farther. This really was beautiful, and perfect.

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