"Coming Clean" - A Gift for midnight_birth

[a_smrw_gift]

Title: Coming Clean
Author: queenb23more
Gift For: midnight_birth
Summary: Rose’s retaliation when Scorpius takes a prank too far leads to unexpected admissions.
Rating: R
Warnings: language, some sexual content
Word Count: 2542
Author's Note: I tried to fit in more than one of your prompts and hope that you are happy with the results. Thanks so much to T for the beta

Comments

[drcjsnider]

heh... I loved Scorpius dreams and how it finally makes him admit his feelings for Rose

[midnight_birth]

Please forgive me, dear author, for this being so late. I'm in the middle of moving and being sick, and always manage to fall a little behind on my reading. I have sat down to give you the review this amazing piece deserves before I run off and see who you are! xD

I absolutely loved this gift! :D It was funny, it was sweet, it was so in character (I know, we don't have a lot to go on from the books, but everyone is exactly the way I imagine them to be). And you took my propmt and made something so very awesome out of it! xD

I really love your Rose. It's nice to see her being so much like her mother, but so much like her father, too. I love seeing that while she's very concerned about school and has great grades, she's James's partner in crime and she's inherited the Marauders Map, which is a brilliant concept in and of itself!!I also can definitely see a lot of Hermione in her the way she stands up to Scorpius, and then Ron shines through with her recklessness when she immidiately hits him with a spell. I love a passionate, gutsy

[rose_starr]

Oh yay!! You have no idea how happy I am that you liked it!! I thought your prompts were so awesome, and I really wanted to do them justice!! And I am thrilled that the characters were 'in character' for you (I always worry about that so much)!! And that you liked the dream sequence! I have to tell you, as soon as I saw that you'd used a hippogriff, I had to use that prompt and a dream was the only way I could think to do so without having to try and write Hagrid. ;)

Seriously, though, thank you for the awesome comments, and again, I'm soooo happy that you're happy with it!! ♥

And I do hope you're feeling better and all moved in! ♥

[lachambre11]

I really liked it - Scorpius' dream was so naught, lol, and he finally admitted to Rose he has feelings for her =)