"Coming Clean" - A Gift for midnight_birth

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Title: Coming Clean
Author: queenb23more
Gift For: midnight_birth
Summary: Rose’s retaliation when Scorpius takes a prank too far leads to unexpected admissions.
Rating: R
Warnings: language, some sexual content
Word Count: 2542
Author's Note: I tried to fit in more than one of your prompts and hope that you are happy with the results. Thanks so much to T for the beta

Comments

[midnight_birth]

Please forgive me, dear author, for this being so late. I'm in the middle of moving and being sick, and always manage to fall a little behind on my reading. I have sat down to give you the review this amazing piece deserves before I run off and see who you are! xD

I absolutely loved this gift! :D It was funny, it was sweet, it was so in character (I know, we don't have a lot to go on from the books, but everyone is exactly the way I imagine them to be). And you took my propmt and made something so very awesome out of it! xD

I really love your Rose. It's nice to see her being so much like her mother, but so much like her father, too. I love seeing that while she's very concerned about school and has great grades, she's James's partner in crime and she's inherited the Marauders Map, which is a brilliant concept in and of itself!!I also can definitely see a lot of Hermione in her the way she stands up to Scorpius, and then Ron shines through with her recklessness when she immidiately hits him with a spell. I love a passionate, gutsy woman! ;)

Scorpius was awesome! The troublemaker I love him to be who is indeed a typical Slytherin; arrogant, proud, nonapologetic. But I do like to see a side of him when he is reasonable after all, as he does realize he's went too far with his jokes. And, of course, the way he just goes for it in the end is very awesome. xD

I really liked the dream sequence. It felt like a very realistic dream, jumping between locations, for example, or not having strict contanuity. Not to mention it was hot! ;) I love that it's how Scorpius finally realizes he wants Rose, and it's the last thing to snap him out of it and make him just go for it.

Thank you, thank you, thank you for this awesome gift! xD I really love it!

♥

[rose_starr]

Oh yay!! You have no idea how happy I am that you liked it!! I thought your prompts were so awesome, and I really wanted to do them justice!! And I am thrilled that the characters were 'in character' for you (I always worry about that so much)!! And that you liked the dream sequence! I have to tell you, as soon as I saw that you'd used a hippogriff, I had to use that prompt and a dream was the only way I could think to do so without having to try and write Hagrid. ;)

Seriously, though, thank you for the awesome comments, and again, I'm soooo happy that you're happy with it!! ♥

And I do hope you're feeling better and all moved in! ♥