"Mixed Feelings" - A Gift for tudorrose1533

Aug 15, 2009 03:08

Title: Mixed Feelings
Author: scarletladyy
Gift For: Tudorrose1533
Summary: Rose and Scorpius are preparing for their wedding, but with Scorpius' job meaning he has to travel, it has put a strain on their relationship.
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Sexual situations, Infidelity.
Word Count: 3505
Author's Note: Thank you so much to andiais for betaing this for me.

Mixed Feelings )

round two, rating:nc-17, author:scarletladyy, fic

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drcjsnider August 15 2009, 14:37:22 UTC
Scorpius and rose's relationship seems headed (if it isn't already there) for disaster... she should hexed his bits off...

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inspired_ideas August 15 2009, 18:29:47 UTC
Oh, dear! This doesn't bode well for future happiness, does it?

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lachambre11 August 17 2009, 21:47:47 UTC
I'm really not quite sure how I feel about Rose and Scorpius here. They seem to head off for a troubled marriage, for sure, if he's cheating and mistreating Rose like he is doing, and she just takes it lying down. I don't know why or how she didn't kicked his arsed and cancelled the wedding when she found out about him cheating, and I don't understand why Scorpius is so aloof. Angst all around in this story, but I did enjoyed seeing a bit of Ginny, Molly and Hermione.

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tudorrose1533 August 18 2009, 00:17:47 UTC
Hi! Thanks so much for my fic, I really enjoyed it! You totally delivered what I asked for--a fic about really grown-ups with adult problems. I enjoyed your depictions of two people in a relationship for not all the right reasons, and not sure how to remedy it, and I liked the cameos from the various family members. Thanks again!!!

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zgurl49 August 18 2009, 12:48:45 UTC
I'm not sure what to think of this story. It was good but I felt like the ending was rushed and left off at an odd spot. In my humble opinion she should have smacked him in front of everyone :o). All in all it was a good story - maybe you could turn it into a longer fic. Kudos!

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