Ye Olde Concrit Post

Think I'm doin' it wrong? Think I'm doin' it right? Comments on characterization, voice, writing, and whatnot can be left here. Comment screening is on, etc., etc.

I reserve the right to comment back (or not) and to take suggestions or not, but I can assure that I am not put off or offended by earnest critique.

( Mysterium Tremendum Application )

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The Character Expression Meme
Character: Badou Nails
Journal: smokeeasy
RPG: soul_campaign

.happy..sad..angry..scared.

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[Remember that beard Badou had a couple days ago? Well it's still there, now parted into two neat long braids. He's got a cigarette hanging from his lips, and he's singing more than a bit off key. When he speaks it's in a gruff put-on pirate voice.] Yo-ho-ho and a dead man's chest.Avast, me hearties! Whar be the cigarette machine? Batton down the ( Read more... )

[The video flicks on to show...Badou ( Read more... )

[ There's the sound of heavy but muffled footsteps, a door opening that suddenly makes said steps a lot clearer, especially as they seem to be headed directly toward the microphone of the device. When they stop there's a noise that is suspiciously like shoving, then a rather ungraceful sounding thud a vocal protest somewhat like "D'o-ffff--!" and a ( Read more... )

Hey, so what do you think happens if you wrap yourself in red tape?

Shit.

Well so much for waking up and finding out all that crap last night was just a dream.

[Mutters, almost inaudibly] God damn it, I knew it wasn't really him to begin with. Fucking stupid thing to do...

[A deep sigh] Fuck, my cigarettes were in those pants....

Hey, does anybody have any smokes?