[Criminal Minds] Lorenz Attractor (JJ/Hotch, PG-13) (1/1)

Jun 17, 2010 00:45

Title: Lorenz Attractor
Author: smittywing/Smitty
Pairing: Jennifer Jareau/Aaron Hotchner
Rating: PG-13...if that
Wordcount: ~1150
Spoilers/Warning: Some future season. No real spoilers.

Notes: shetiger asked for, "something where JJ and Hotch are just hanging on by fingernails not to give in, but then they do. Maybe a hug lasts a little too long, or staring at ( Read more... )

criminal minds, fic

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shetiger June 17 2010, 05:11:40 UTC
Eee, you posted! And I love where you ended it very much. :D

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smittywing June 22 2010, 13:40:02 UTC
*hugs* Thank you! (Especially for cheerleading while I wrote it!) :) I couldn't leave it without the kiss. It pained me too much.

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theras June 17 2010, 06:58:48 UTC
debadkavfeadaevdeba \o/

because attraction and empathy with the parenting and yespleasemore

\o/\o/\o/\o/\o/

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smittywing June 22 2010, 13:41:17 UTC
Thank you! I'm really glad you enjoyed it. :D They were the pairing I had originally wanted to write (in the two weeks they were both not with other people? although even that is unlikely) before Rossi/Prentiss ate my brain.

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theras June 22 2010, 19:43:37 UTC
Oh, dear. I mean, I adore your Rossi/Prentiss stories, but I really like the idea of Hotch/JJ.

The way I deal with Will in my head is that, because I really really like him (I'd probably marry him myself, actually, and I have no plans, ever, to get married in RL), officially I support the canon relationship, but... I mean, he's never there. We can pretend he doesn't exist, right? Or that he and JJ are no longer in a romantic relationship for no particularly dramatic reason that critisizes neither of them?

Is there a way to uneat your brain - and still get pancakes, eventually? I gotta tell you, it's a hard decision between the potential for Hotch/JJ and pancakes...

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mingsmommy June 17 2010, 10:17:04 UTC
OMG!

You are utterly amazing and I am never writing again. This is gorgeous...the eyelashes and the butterfly's wing...just utterly gorgeous.

You are a genius.

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smittywing June 22 2010, 13:42:20 UTC
Oh, you! It is imperative you continue writing. Where will I get my Rossi Family Fix? Thank you for the lovely comments! I am so pleased you liked it. :)

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theras June 22 2010, 20:13:14 UTC
I second smittywing on this.

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smacky30 June 17 2010, 12:01:25 UTC
You know I have a total weakness for Hotch and JJ together. And you totally rocked this. Totally.

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smittywing June 22 2010, 13:42:43 UTC
Aw, thank you!

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failegaidin June 17 2010, 13:35:35 UTC
This may have just made my morning. You encapsulated so many of the reasons I ship these two in this little story. Fabulous job :D

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smittywing June 22 2010, 14:13:37 UTC
Aw, thank you! I really wanted to ship them pretty early on, but there was Haley and then there was Will (retroactively) and then I got distracted by Rossi/Prentiss. Maybe in the future.... :)

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