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Link to GDOC (eventually I will make it a whole post, but for now forgive my laziness! ) - https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Q6Xl2YbYmSv-pz6s7vVwmMAmCLONhrNBLP3hQds3j-k/edit?authkey=CNS708YO&hl=en#